to be honest, I'm not sure if I like the story, yet. But, very good job on it. From what I can see it looks like a lot of hard work went into and it looks very professional indeed. However, a suggestion if I may. Some of the dialogue in it doesn't fit the character. Lucca's for example, when she's talking to the soldiers. It's definitely not her personality that's coming out, but someone elses. Maybe you intended for this to be this way, I don't know, but it doesn't seem to fit her character. But it definitely picked up after that point.
Excellently done, in all other aspects. I'll have to catch more to see if I warm up to the story of it as it goes along.
