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Re: Chrono Helix (script)
« Reply #180 on: May 29, 2010, 08:32:54 pm »
Okay, first of all, I ran out of space before getting to Sprigg and Radius,
so I'll be posting their conversation after the next chapter.

Secondly, I may have botched Glenn's characterization a bit, but I'm not
sure what I should have done instead. Or maybe I just think I screwed up because
I'm to tired right now to think straight, period.



Midgame Sidequests, Part I

   Recruits: The player will definitely have Lynx-Serge, Sprigg, Radius, Norris.
        Depending on where they are in the main storyline, what recruitments/re-recruitments
        have been performed, etc., they may also have Magus, Guile, Nikki, Glenn, Skelly,
        Luccia, Grobyc, ZOAH, Karsh, Dario, Orlha, and/or Harle. (15 chars--argh!) If
        Magus was recruited at any point, he will stick with the party and be impossible
        to boot out, although he can be relegated to a non-combat position.


PART I: Magus and Guile Again

======================================================
Back Room, The Dragon's Tail (Another)
======================================================

[This bit can take place any time after Lynx-Serge regains access to Another World.
It requires speaking to Guile at the Dragon's Tail with Magus in the party.]

Guile:
   Magus! I was not expecting to
   see you again so soon.

   Perhaps you would like to
   solve for me the mystery of
   why you are travelling with
   Lynx...?

Magus:
   That isn't Lynx, just Lynx's
   body.

Guile:
   Then...the real Lynx is...

Magus:
   Occupying Serge's body at the
   moment, as far as we know.

Guile:
   This is...rather a lot to
   absorb...

Serge:
   Um, if you don't mind my
   changing the subject, have you
   seen Kid anywhere since you
   left Fort Dragonia?

Guile:
   I fear not--and I have been
   looking, for her and for
   you.

Serge:
   Damn!

Guile:
   If I may ask, where have you
   been since you disappeared
   from the fort?

Magus:
   We landed in the other world,
   and had to make a bit of a
   detour before returning to
   this dimension.

Sprigg:                      | Serge:
   Heh. If you aren't gonna  |    Um, Magus... Aren't you
   say it, I will, just to   |    going to tell him about
   see the look on 'is face. |    the Dead Sea?

Guile:
   Pardon?

Sprigg:                 | Serge:
   Your friend 'as 'iz  |    We...found out a bit about
   memory back.         |    Magus' history.

[Guile reels theatrically back against the wall.]

Guile:
   I think I...need
   to sit down.

Magus:
   That might be wise. We have
   a great deal to discuss.

[Fade out.]

======================================================
The Dragon's Tail (Another)
======================================================

[When the scene fades back in, Magus and Guile are seated at one
of the tables in the Dragon's Tail, alone.]

Guile:
   A prince of Zeal. I can scarcely
   believe it. I was expecting
   something mysterious and
   strange, but...not this.

Magus:
   I suppose the story does sound
   like a fairytale to someone who
   doesn't remember the hell it
   actually was. I am...very tired
   of having worlds crumble out
   from under me.

Guile:
   And so you intend to stay with
   Serge and attempt to save this
   one?

Magus:
   And so I intend to stay with
   Serge and see if the events that
   center around him will allow me
   to fill in the remaining holes
   in my past. I am beginning to
   get the impression that he and
   I are tangled in opposite sides
   of the same net.

Guile:
   I admit, it does seem very
   curious that you cannot remember
   the previous Arbiter. Is he the
   only thing still missing from
   your memory?

Magus:
   There are three patterns of
   holes. One has to do with the
   Arbiter, one with what I was
   doing between the death of
   Lavos and meeting you, and
   one...with my sister.

Guile:
   Your sister?

Magus:
   My older sister, yes. Schala.
   She all but raised me while our
   parents were busy with affairs
   of state, and yet, while I can
   remember the sound of her voice
   and the feel of the silk of her
   robes under my hands, I cannot
   see her face in my mind.

Guile:
   Could she have been the Arbiter
   that you can't remember?

Magus:
   !

   It's possible, certainly. She
   would have been old enough.

Guile:
   Could she also have been what
   you were looking for that day?

Magus:
   I see what you're getting at.
   Not three patterns of holes,
   but one, centering around her.
   The obvious, simple solution,
   and I couldn't see it.

[Magus hits the table with a clenched fist.]

Guile:
   Does this mean I am still living
   up to my half of our bargain?

Magus:
   Bargain? ...Oh. That. I hadn't
   considered it to still be in
   force.

Guile:
   Why not? I am not nearly as
   powerful as you are, which
   suggests that you still have
   more to teach me, and you have
   not yet fully deciphered the
   mystery of your past, which
   suggests I may yet be of aid
   to you in answering the
   questions you have left.

Magus:
   I have taught you all that I
   consider safe to pass on. The
   remainder of my knowledge will
   die with me.

Guile:
   But why?

Magus:
   Because it is horrific. In my
   quest to defeat Lavos, I was
   willing to do anything to
   gain power. Torture, human
   sacrifice, necromancy... I
   flinched from none of it. If I
   burdened you with even half of
   what I know, you would hate me
   for it afterwards.

   It's ironic, I suppose: Crono's
   ghost spoke of the empty future
   we destroyed coming to take its
   revenge, but the future doesn't
   disturb me. The past, however...
   I'm not surprised that I was
   willing to wipe those dark years
   from my memory.

Guile:
   And yet I would have said that
   running away from anything,
   including your past, was not
   in your character.

Magus:
   No, there was more to it than
   that. I just wish I could
   remember what. It may be
   important.

[Magus shakes his head.]

[Magus]
   Will you come with us when we
   leave?

Guile:
   Of course--my curiosity is far
   from being satisfied!

[System]
   Guile joins your party!

[The player gets control back with the party standing outside the
Dragon's Tail.]

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PART II: Re-recruiting Glenn

======================================================
Glenn and Dario's House, Termina (Another)
======================================================

[Approach Glenn as Lynx without either Radius or Dario in the party,
and something like this happens...]

Serge:
   Glenn--

Glenn:
   I am not well-disposed toward
   demi-humans right now, and you
   bear a suspicious resemblance
   to the one known as Lynx. Go
   away.

Serge:
   But I'm--

Glenn:
   I do not want to hear it.
   Leave this place, or I will
   draw my sword, and it will
   not go well for you if you
   force me to do that.

[Glenn turns his back to Serge]

Zoah: [if present]
   HE IS TOO ANGRY TO LISTEN
   TO US RIGHT NOW.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

[if Karsh is present]

Karsh:
   Heh. You were always a stubborn
   one, weren't you, Glenn? The
   only people you would ever
   listen to were Radius and...

[Karsh shakes his head and doesn't finish the sentence]

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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======================================================
Glenn and Dario's House, Termina (Another)
======================================================

[This bit can take place any time after Lynx-Serge regains access to Another World.
It requires approaching Glenn with Radius in the party (which he normally will be
when the party first returns to Termina (Another)]

Serge:
   Glenn! I'm glad to see that you
   got back from Fort Dragonia in
   one piece! Have you seen any
   sign of Kid?

Glenn:
   Lynx! How dare you show your
   face in Termina again, you
   honourless fiend!

[Serge steps back as Glenn pulls out his sword]

Serge:
   (Oh, damn, for a moment I forgot
   what face I'm wearing these
   days! If I want to salvage this,
   I'm going to have to talk fast!)

   Look, I'm not really Lynx, and
   we're not here to fight--

Glenn:
   Must you compound your foul
   deeds by lying as well?

[He swings his sword at Serge, but Radius steps forward and blocks the
blow with his staff.]

Radius:
   I thought I had trained that
   impulsiveness out of you, Glenn.

Glenn:
   Radius...?! But I thought that
   you had resolved to never leave
   your island again!

[Glenn puts his sword away, and Radius goes back to using his staff
as a walking stick]

Radius:
   I came out of
   retirement to
   help Serge.

Glenn:
   Then why are you
   with Lynx?

Radius:
   This is not Lynx. Nor is the
   rebel of whom we have been
   hearing rumours truly Serge.

Glenn:
   I do not understand. What
   is going on here?

Serge:
   Well, it's like this...

[The screen fades out, then in again, as Serge waves his arms expressively]

Glenn:
   I see. So you are the true
   Serge, and the one who has been
   stirring up trouble using your
   name is Lynx.

Serge:
   Yeah, that's right. (Phew, he
   finally got it.)

Glenn:
   Then I suppose I should tell
   you that I know nothing of what
   has happened to Kid since you
   and I last parted ways. I am
   sorry.

Serge:
   Don't worry about it. (Damn! I
   know it isn't his fault, but
   I'm getting tired of no one
   knowing anything! If Kid's dead,
   I...I'll...I don't know what,
   but Lynx isn't going to be
   happy when I do it!)

Radius:
   You will be coming with us,
   I trust, Glenn. You owe Serge
   something in return for
   attacking him without warning.

Glenn:
   ...You may not be the Radius of
   this world, but you speak with
   his voice. Very well, I will
   come.

[System]
   Glenn joins your party!

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======================================================
Glenn and Dario's House, Termina (Another)
======================================================

[This is the alternate version which takes place if Dario is in the party
when they approach Glenn. The dialogue is the same even if Glenn
was not recruited in the first part of the game. If both Dario and Radius are
in the party, Dario's presence trumps Radius'. The scene begins as soon as the
party enters the house--no need to actually try to speak to Glenn.]

[Dario looks around]

Dario:
   This brings back memories...
   the old place hasn't changed
   very much.

[Glenn jumps a bit, and turns to face Dario]

Dario:
   Is that you, Glenn? You've grown
   so much in the years that I've
   been away that I almost didn't
   recognize you.

Glenn:
   B-brother?! But this is
   impossible! Am I seeing
   ghosts?!

[Dario shakes his head]

Dario:
   I was badly hurt while we were
   investigating the Isle of the
   Dead, and I lost my memory as
   a result, so I didn't know that
   I'd left anyone behind who might
   be worried about me. I'm sorry.

Glenn:
   You don't need to apologize.
   I'm just happy...to see you
   again... (Sniff...)

[Glenn turns away, as though to hide the fact that he's crying, but
Dario walks around to stand in front of him and puts his hands on
Glenn's shoulders.]

Dario:
   No need to hide, Glenn. I feel
   like crying too. Even though I
   didn't remember you, I knew that
   there was something missing in
   my life--I just didn't know that
   it had names like "Glenn",
   "Karsh", and "Riddel"--my little
   brother, my best friend, and the
   woman that I love. Even if you
   and I aren't from the same
   world--

Glenn:
   "The same..." Wait a minute! Am
   I to understand that you're from
   Serge's world? But the Glenn
   there...

Serge:
   Most of the Dragoons from my
   world followed Lynx on an
   expedition to the Dead Sea...
   and never came back.

Dario:
   And the "me" of this world
   doesn't seem to have survived
   either, so I suppose we're
   the only ones left. Does it
   truly matter so very much?

Glenn:
   N-no, I suppose it doesn't.
   Even if you don't stay in
   this world, knowing that
   you are alive and well...
   helps a little.

Dario:
   I haven't decided what I'm
   going to do yet. I have some
   plans for the other world's
   Viper Manor, but Riddel may
   not want to be separated from
   her father, and I doubt he will
   leave this world. In the
   meanwhile, I am helping Serge
   here with his quest to find
   Lynx and get his body back.

[Glenn turns to face Serge.]

Glenn:
   Then...you are Serge? That
   is...bizarre, if you will
   pardon my saying so.

Serge:
   Yeah, tell me about it.

Dario:
   Why don't you come with us?

Karsh: [if present]
   Yeah, why don't you? It'll
   be just like old times!

Glenn:
   If you want me to come, then of
   course I will. I only hope that
   I can be of use to you, brother.

Dario:
   I'm sure you will, but the real
   reason I want you to come with
   us is simply that I would like
   to have your company again,
   after so long apart.

Glenn:
   Brother...

[System]
   Glenn joins your party!

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PART III: Re-recruiting Skelly

======================================================
Skelly's House, Termina (Another)
======================================================

[Obviously, things only work this way if they reassembled Skelly completely and recruited
him before the body-switch. This scene unfolds if the party then goes to Skelly's
place in Termina, and speaks to him...]

Skelly:
   Nyak-nyak-nyak!
   As I always said,
   grandma makes the best
   spearhead shark soup in
   the world!

Serge:
   (I wonder if he realizes it's
   just running back out between
   his ribs...?)

[Skelly's grandma]
   Skelly, dear, are these people
   your guests?

Serge:
   Um, not exactly, Ma'am, but
   we would like a word with
   your grandson, if that's okay
   with both of you.

[Skelly's grandma]
   Oh, of course that's perfectly
   fine. Not many of Skelly's
   friends come to visit him
   anymore, and I'm sure he's
   getting bored, with no one to
   talk to but this old woman...

Skelly:
   Don't be silly, Grandma--
   I'd nevah get bored of talkin'
   with you! But I do have a thing
   or two I need ta say to these
   folks. We'll just be a minute,
   'kay?

[Skelly's grandma]
   Of course, Skelly.
   Enjoy your talk.

[Skelly hustles the party out of the house, not stopping until everyone is outside
on the main Termina screen and the door is firmly shut behind them.]

Skelly:
   Okay, Lynx, start talkin',
   but I'll warn ya now that
   I won't do anythin' that
   would hurt Grandma.

Serge:
   Look, I know it's hard to
   believe, but I'm NOT Lynx.

Skelly:
   You know, if you're gonna tell
   jokes like that, you've gotta
   work on the delivery. Sayin' it
   all deadpan just takes the life
   right out of it.

Sprigg:                    | Glenn:                      | Serge:
   Do you 'onestly believe |    I did not believe it     |    It wasn't a joke! (I can
   that the real Lynx 'az  |    myself at first, but     |    understand why people never
   a sense of 'umour?      |    he is telling the truth. |    believe me, but I'm getting
                           |                             |    tired of it.)

Skelly:
   So if you're not Lynx, who
   are you--and it had bettah
   be some punchline!

Serge:
   I'm Serge.

Skelly:
   YOU'RE Serge?!

   ...You weren't supposed to say
   somethin' that makes sense.

Serge:
   Then...you believe me?

Skelly:
   I haven't been hidin' undah
   a rock, ya know. You hear a
   lot of stuff in Termina. Like
   stuff about a Serge who sure
   as heck doesn't act like the
   Serge I remembah...and doesn't
   recognize me, eithah, even
   when I'm sittin' at the next
   table ovah in the Dragon's Tail.
   I figured then that there was
   somethin' wrong--I mean, it
   ain't like this face is an
   easy one to forget! Nyak-nyak-
   nyak!

Serge:
   Heh, that's for sure. Look,
   Skelly, I'm trying to get
   my body back from Lynx. Could
   you...lend me a hand?

[Skelly uses his right hand to tug on the left one]

Skelly:
   Well, looks like it ain't gonna
   come off, so I'll just have to
   go with ya, hands and all!

[Serge facepalms]

Serge:
   (I should have known better
   than to phrase that the way
   I did.)

   Before we get going, one
   more thing--have you heard
   anything, anything at all,
   about Kid?

Skelly:
   So she's missing, is she? I
   haven't heard a word, but
   chin up, okay? We'll find her.
   I mean, you found all my bones,
   and a gal like Kid's a lot
   harder to hide than those were!
   Nyak-nyak-nyak!

[System]
   Skelly became the life of
   your party once more!

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PART IV: Grounded UFOs

[This could happen basically at any time after Serge gets his
hands on the boat in Home World.]

======================================================
Sky Dragon Isle (Home)
======================================================

[The party climbs up to the top of the island and opens the chest
sitting in the center of the last area. As they discover that it's
empty, Giant Starky enters from the right side of the screen.]

 [Giant Starky]
   Give me.
   Star Fragment!

 [Expedition Guy]
    Nooooo, it's here!

Serge:
   (Oh, great. Just when I start
   thinking I've seen all the Weird
   there is in the universe,
   something even weirder
   shows up.)

[Combat with Starky. Afterwards, Giant Starky turns into Normal Starky...]

Luccia:                           | Norris:             | Guile:            | Karsh:
   So dis is the true form        |    So its true self |    Fascinating.   |    Give me a
   of dat creature? Interesting.  |    is this small?   |    How could such |    break--we
   Vhat ve fought vas no simple   |    How strange.     |    a tiny being   |    were really
   projection. How did it achieve |                     |    appear to be   |    fighting
   such a metamorphosis?          |                     |    so large?      |    that midget?!
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Zoah:                   | Grobyc:               | Serge:
   AND I THOUGHT I HAD  |    Small-creature-    |    So it was really the
   FINALLY FOUND AN     |    is-strong. Grobyc- |    size of an eight-year-old
   OPPONENT LARGER THAN |    is-impressed.      |    kid?! (Oh, man, even
   I AM.                |                       |    MORE weird.)

[Starky runs over to the side and bounces up and down]

 [Starky]
   Naha-naha... Naha-naha...
   
Mysterious Creature:
   Whoopipeee!
   Star Fragment miine.

Serge:
   Son of a--! It
   picked my pocket!

 [System]
   Catch him with the x button!!!

[Starky runs for it. The party runs after him. If/when they catch him...]

Mysterious Creature:
   Starky shocked!

Mysterious Creature:
   Starky got caught.
   you win.

Serge:
   What can I say? I've had a lot
   of practice running after stuff
   lately. (Pant, pant.) What are
   you, anyway?
   
Mysterious Creature:
   Starky come from
   farawaay stars.

Starky:
   But Starky's ship
   fall from sky.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

[If Magus is present and the party has been to the Dead Sea]

Magus:
   The last creature I encountered
   that fell from the sky was no
   friend to anything of this
   world.

Serge:
   So what do you
   suggest we do?
   Kill him?

Magus:
   Indeed. It would
   be safest.

Starky:
   Eep! Starky noo
   liike you.

Serge:
   Don't worry, I won't let him
   hurt you. And anyway, he isn't
   half as nasty as he likes to
   pretend he is. (Trust Magus to
   take what I said seriously when
   I was trying to be sarcastic!)

Magus:
   Very well, but I warn you: do
   not trust this creature. It
   isn't half as helpless as it
   seems. That gun it's carrying
   represents a far more advanced
   technology than anything that
   will be developed in this world
   for hundreds of years.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

[If Luccia is present]

Luccia:
   Life from anodder vorld...so
   such a thing exists! Ah, if
   only I could dissect it...

[Starky dodges around to hide behind Serge.]

Starky:
   You aare scary peeople.
   Starky friightened.

Serge:
   Luccia--

Luccia:
   I am not saying I vill attack
   him! I merely mean...if he dies
   here on dis planet...I do not
   vish the body to go to vaste!

Serge:
   ...(I honestly don't know
   what to say. Is her research
   really that important to her?)

Starky:
   Starky cannot stop yoou if
   Starky is dead.

Luccia:
   Den in principle, ve are agreed.
   I vill of course give vhat is
   left aftervards a decent burial.

[Serge shakes his head]

Serge:
   (I think they're BOTH aliens.)

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Serge:
   Why did you want the Star
   Fragment, anyway?

Starky:
   Star Fragment is Starky's
   ship fragment.
   The ship turned to
   fragments after crash.

Norris: [if present]
   Then...the Star Fragment
   is a material capable of
   protecting a ship travelling
   through space...

Luccia: [if present]
   Physics is not my area, but
   I know of people dat vould
   be greatly interested in
   dis Star Fragment...

Serge:
   I wonder... Things work out
   differently in the other world,
   sometimes. Your ship might still
   be in one piece there. (Or he
   might well never have come to
   this world at all...but I'm
   not going to tell him that.
   The poor little guy looks so
   dejected already.)
   
Starky:
   Reeally! Whoopeee!
   Starky will come with you.

 [System]
   Starky jooined youur party!

Starky:
   But...what is this
   "other world"?

Serge:
   (Sigh) I'll explain as we
   go along, okay?



Next posting will be the first part of chapter 21, in which Viper Manor is reinvaded,
and Magus finally runs into Belthasar.

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Re: Chrono Helix (script)
« Reply #181 on: May 29, 2010, 09:19:12 pm »
Ah, re-recruitments. And that would solve one of my only few complaints about Cross. Anyway...

And Magus finally runs into Belthasar.

This should be interesting...

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Re: Chrono Helix (script)
« Reply #182 on: May 30, 2010, 09:00:53 pm »
Unfortunately, Magus and Belthasar will only have time for a bit of shocked mutual recognition before being interrupted. Grobyc-does-not-like-to-be-ignored, and if I let Magus find out about the Schala-resurrection plan before Terra Tower I risk breaking the plot. So not as interesting as it might be without those constraints.

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Re: Chrono Helix (script)
« Reply #183 on: June 13, 2010, 08:40:53 pm »
I had to split this into two sections again, and this part does not get as far
as Magus meeting Belthasar--sorry. On the gripping hand, we do get to see Zoah display
something that might be a rudimentary sense of humour. Or not. I don't think poooor
Staaarky got even one line. I'm starting to have trouble keeping track of people. :(

I have no idea why I inflicted a name on the Porrean officer, beyond the fact that
it seemed like a good idea at the time.



21. Back to Viper Manor - A captive audience awaits... Part I

   Max recruits: Lynx-Serge, Magus, Sprigg, Harle, Radius, Norris, Skelly,
        Guile OR Glenn, Karsh OR ZOAH, Starky.
   Recruitable: Grobyc. Luccia becomes re-recruitable after the end of the chapter.

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Viper Manor Gates (Another)
===========================================================

[Serge speaks to the Porrean soldiers guarding the gate.]

 [Porre Soldier]
   Sir Lynx,
   please go on through.
   
[The soldiers move aside and open the gate to let the party past.]

Serge:
   (I'll be damned, they really do
   believe that I'm Lynx. Does he
   get this treatment everywhere
   he goes?)

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Viper Manor Courtyard (Another)
===========================================================

[The soldiers outside the mansion's main door also stand aside.]

 [Porre Soldier]
   Please go on through.

Serge:
   (They're even holding the door
   for me. I could get used to
   this...if it didn't mean keeping
   Lynx's body.)

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Riddel's Room, Viper Manor (Another)
===========================================================

[As the party enters the mansion, we are shown Riddel, seated at a table,
guarded by two Porrean soldiers. A Porrean officer is questioning her.
Norris(Another) is standing on the officer's side of the table, but not really
close to the officer himself. Grobyc-is-leaning-against-the-wall-to-Norris'-right.]

Porre Officer:
   Being stubborn, eh?

Porre Officer:
   I'm going to ask you one more time.
   What happened at Fort Dragonia!?
   Where is General Viper!?
   And where is the Frozen Flame!?

Riddel:
   I do not know.
   And even if I did,
   I would never tell you!

Porre Officer:
   Damn this goody-two-shoes...
   Listen up, missy, do you know
   what kind of predicament you're in!?

[Norris turns to face the officer]

Norris:
   Please, sir, this woman
   has done nothing wrong.
   
Porre Officer:
   She is a prisoner of the Porre military.
   This is a legitimate interrogation!

Norris:
   I do not believe that, sir.
   There has to be a better way
   to go about this! Just give it
   a little more time and...

Porre Officer:
   We don't have the time, Norris!
   I have no time to be listening
   to your idealistic theories.

Porre Officer:
   Now, missy...
   Let's have you go
   down to the basement.

Norris:
   No, please!
   Wait!

Porre Officer:
   Norris!!!
   I've had enough of you for today.
   I want you to stay out of this!

Norris[Another]:
   ......

Porre Officer:
   Take her away!

 [Porre Soldier]
   Yes, sir!

[The two soldiers who were guarding Riddel hustle her out of the room. Norris
watches them go.]

Porre Officer:
   You disappoint me...
   Remain on standby
   in the parlor!

Porre Officer:
   I can't hear you!

[Grobyc leaves his position by the wall and moves toward the two of them.
Norris turns to watch him.]

Norris[Another]:
   Please, wait.
   Think of what you are doing.
   Can you live with that?

Porre Officer:
   He won't talk to you.
   He has no interest
   other than fighting.

Norris[Another]:
   This cannot be...
   Is he the one from the lab...?

Porre Officer:
   That's right.
   This is the Killing
   Machine Grobyc.
   
Grobyc:
   ......
   Grobyc-only-takes-orders
   from-those-who-are-stronger.

[Grobyc leaves the room.]

Porre Officer:
   Hah...!
   Another soldier
   who won't listen...
   
Porre Officer:
   Dismissed!

[Norris leaves, and a generic Porrean soldier walks in]

Porre Officer:
   Call in the cook!
   The '"hell"' one, of course...

 [Porre Soldier]
   Yes, sir!

[sequence ends, and we return to the party, who are standing in the foyer.]

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Library, Viper Manor (Another)
===========================================================

[If Magus is in the party, the library will be empty when they enter it.]

Serge:
   ...Is that a note on the desk?

[Magus strides over and grabs it.]

Magus:
   It says, "I must have just
   missed you. Riddel is being held
   in one of the cells in the
   basement. I suggest you speak to
   Norris before charging in to
   save her. He should be in the
   front parlour." Hmph.

[Magus crumples the note. When he opens his hand again, flames burst out
around his fingers.]

Magus:
   This old man is starting
   to annoy me.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

[If Magus isn't in the party, Belthasar is there when they arrive.]

Serge:
   Excuse me? Prophet? I--

Prophet:
   Hmmm...
   It appears that my worst
   fear has come true.
   You are Serge inside
   Lynx's body...

Serge:
   You can tell?

Prophet:
   It would be obvious to any--
   A-HEM. Regardless of that...
   You have come to rescue
   Riddel, have you not?

Serge:
   (Obvious to any...what? Why
   did he just cut himself off
   like that?) That's right.
   Do you have any idea where
   she is?

Prophet:
   I believe Riddel has been
   imprisoned in the basement.
   First, go and find Norris.
   He should be able to help you.

Serge:
   Wait just a minute. The Norris
   from this world still thinks
   that I'm Lynx, and I don't think
   he entirely trusts me. Why would
   he want to help us?

Prophet:
   Norris...is not the sort of man
   who would approve of what his
   superiors are doing to Riddel.

~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-

[If Norris is in the party]

Norris:
   Do you happen to know who
   is in charge of this...
   travesty of an investigation?

Prophet:
   I believe his name is
   Davik.

Norris:
   Colonel Davik... I see.

Serge:
   (From the look on his face,
   I'd guess that Norris really
   doesn't like this Davik guy.)

~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-

Serge:
   So where can we find this
   world's Norris?

Prophet:
   I believe he went to the front
   parlour after walking out on the
   last questioning session in
   disgust.

Serge:
   Okay, thanks. (How does this guy
   know anything about this
   "questioning session"? If the
   Porreans are trying to get
   information about the Dead Sea
   out of Riddel, I can't see them
   letting the mansion's librarian
   sit in...and I wouldn't have
   thought he'd waste his...gift,
   or whatever, on predicting
   something like that. Or is it
   because he knew I was going to
   show up again? But he didn't
   know I was going to be Lynx...
   Aargh, I give up!)
   
===========================================================
Parlor, Viper Manor (Another)
===========================================================

[As the party speaks to him, Norris(Another) snaps to attention and
salutes]

Norris(Another):
   Sir Lynx!
   Please excuse these
   squalid conditions.

Serge:
   I...don't think this is
   especially squalid. (In fact,
   I think describing it that way
   is just short of crazy. I mean,
   sure, there are fancier places
   in Termina and even better rooms
   in this mansion, but even this
   is pretty impressive compared to
   what I grew up with in Arni.
   It makes me wonder what Porre
   is like.)

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

[If Norris(Home) is in the party and was not in the
party when they departed Termina, the Norris-meets-Norris
scene from the previous chapter happens here instead.]

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Norris[Another]:
   Sir...
   This has been bothering me
   since we met up in Termina.
   You seem different from
   what I last remember...
   You just seem...
   different...

Serge:
   It HAS been some time since
   we last met, Captain Norris.
   People can change. (I get the
   feeling that even lying like
   a rug isn't going to keep him
   from figuring this out for much
   longer, but I don't know if
   he'll help me if he finds out
   who I am...)

Norris[Another]:
   ...I see.
   So if I may ask, what happened
   at Fort Dragonia? Did you find
   the Frozen Flame? And where is
   General Viper?

Serge:
   (Oh, hell, what do I say?) The
   Frozen Flame was never anywhere
   near Fort Dragonia. It's been
   in the Dead Sea all along.

Norris[Another]:
   The...Dead Sea?

Serge:
   (Oops, wrong world.) I mean the
   Sea of Eden. There was a...bit
   of a problem at Fort Dragonia.
   A thief from the Radical
   Dreamers showed up, and there
   was a fight. She thought Lynx--

[Serge claps a hand to his mouth.]

Serge:
   (I was so proud of remembering
   the name of the gang Kid used to
   belong to that I just let it
   slip out!)

[Norris pulls his gun]

Norris[Another]:
   Just who are you really, and
   what are you doing here? Your
   life depends on your answer.

Serge:
   (Ulp!)

Norris[Home]:           | Karsh:                       | Zoah:
   Calm yourself. We    |    Argh, what an idiot!      |    THIS IS THAT "SERGE"
   truly mean you no    |    Look, if we were gonna    |    YOU MENTIONED. THE REAL
   harm.                |    hurt you, we'd've done    |    LYNX STOLE HIS BODY.
                        |    it already! Serge here    |    NOW PUT THE GUN DOWN.
   This is Serge, a     |    offered to help us        |    WE ARE NOT HERE TO HURT
   victim of the real   |    rescue Riddel, and that's |    YOU, BUT WE WILL DEFEND
   Lynx's machinations. |    ALL we're here for.       |    OURSELVES IF WE MUST.
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Skelly:                   | Sprigg:                | Radius:           | Magus:
   Can't put one ovah     |    I woz startin' to   |    Please, young  |    His name is
   on you for a minute,   |    wonder if you'd     |    man, it isn't  |    Serge, and
   can we? This is that   |    ever figure it out. |    necessary to   |    for some reason
   Serge guy you asked    |    This is Serge. 'E's |    shoot. This    |    he seems to
   about. The real Lynx   |    kind of stuck in    |    person, as you |    be central to
   stole his body. Now    |    Lynx's body right   |    have observed, |    all of this.
   are you gonna put      |    now. Now, put that  |    is not Lynx,   |    Now put that
   that gun away, or do   |    gun down before ya  |    but that Serge |    gun away before
   you wanna shoot me?    |    do somethin' that   |    you mentioned  |    I feed it to
   I don't mind if you    |    ya didn't mean to,  |    earlier.       |    you.
   do. The bullet would   |    boyo.               |                   |
   just go right through. |                        |                   |

[Norris[Another] lowers his gun.]

Norris[Another]:
   Is it true?
   Sir Lynx...
   What has happened?

Serge:
   Serge, not Lynx. (I am SO
   tired of people calling me
   by that bastard's name even
   when they know better.)
   Anyway, it's a bit of a
   long story, but it happened
   kind of like this...

[Fade out, then back in. When the room reappears, Norris is sitting on the
edge of the bed.]

Norris[Another]:
   I see...

Serge:
   (I'm glad ONE of us does. This
   stupid story is so tangled now
   that it reminds me of what
   happened when Poshul got into
   Leena's grandmother's yarn
   basket...)

Norris[Another]:
   So the Serge commanding
   the insurgent troops is
   the real Lynx...
   Everything is starting
   to make sense.

Norris[Another]:
   We were wrong all along.
   We never should have
   joined forces with Lynx...

Norris(Home): [if present]
   That is the conclusion I came
   to as well. The High Command
   does not appear to be behaving
   rationally in this matter. They
   seem to want the Frozen Flame
   very badly, and Lynx has used
   that to manipulate them.

Norris[Another]:
   You didn't come to the Manor
   just to discuss this with me.
   What brings you here?

Karsh:
                       | Zoah:             | Glenn:                  | Serge:
   Riddel!!!
                 |    WE ARE HERE TO |    You Porreans         |    We're here
   Where is Lady Riddel!!!?
  |    RESCUE LADY    |    are holding the      |    for General
   Bring her out, NOW!!!
     |    RIDDEL. THE    |    General's daughter   |    Viper's
   You lay one filthy finger
|    DRAGOONS HAVE  |    hostage--did you     |    daughter.
   on her and you die!
       |    A DUTY TO SEE  |    truly expect us to   |
   ARGHHHHHH!
                |    THE GENERAL'S  |    just leave her here? |
                             |    DAUGHTER TO    |                         |
                             |    SAFETY.        |                         |
   
Norris[Another]:
   I see. I will do
   what I can to help
   you free her.
   Riddel should be in
   the basement prison.
   Please, take this.

[Norris gets up and walks over to hand Serge the key]

 [System]
   Member received
   the Prison Key!

Serge:
   I'm still not sure it's a good
   idea for us to go walking right
   in past the guards.

Norris[Another]:
   There is a sewage system
   below the prison.
   You should be able to break
   into the prison by making
   your way through the sewers.
   Use the hatch downstairs.

Serge:
   (Viper would have to be awfully
   stupid to leave a back door like
   that into his prison, so...)
   What's the catch?

Norris[Another]:
   The sewers are
   full of monsters.
   Please be alert, I have
   heard of one particularly
   frightful monster.

Serge:
   Thanks for the warning.
   (I'd be more impressed if I
   hadn't already fought Garai
   and that giant parrot of
   Fargo's and all those things
   in the Dead Sea. It's getting
   to the point where I EXPECT
   monsters.)

Norris[Another]:
   I will be in the 1F main hall.
   Please meet me there once
   you rescue Riddel.

Serge:
   Right. Thanks again
   for your help.
   
===========================================================
Kitchen, Viper Manor (Another)
===========================================================

[As the party leaves the room where Norris was waiting, we are taken
briefly to the kitchen down in the basement, which has just been entered
by a Porrean soldier.]

 [Porre Soldier]
   Hi, Orcha.
   It's that time again!

Orcha:
   Whatcha talkin' about?

 [Porre Soldier]
   You know... This...

[The soldier appears to ring a bell. Orcha claps both hands to his head and
sort of squirms across the room.]

Orcha:
   CHAAAAAAAAA!

[Reaching a corner, Orcha stops and crouches slightly. His skin turns blue.]

Hell Orcha: [making chopping motions with a cleaver]
   Acha-cha-cha-cha!

 [Porre Soldier]
   Your guest is waiting
   in the basement.
   
Hell Orcha:
   Acha!

[Hell Orcha leaves the kitchen, with the soldier following, and
we are returned to the party.]
 
===========================================================
Cells, Viper Manor (Another)
===========================================================

[The party has just waded through the sewers and climbed up the ladder leading to
the rightmost jail cell, where Fargo is lying on the bed.]

Fargo:
   Arg...!
   What the hell am
   I doin' here...?

Fargo:
   I miss the smell
   o' the sea...

[The bed begins to bounce.]

Fargo:
   ARG!!!

[Fargo jumps up.]

Fargo:
   Somethin' down below!?

[He gets off the bed.]

Serge:
   Is anyone up there?
   
Fargo:
   Aye!
   Hold on a bit.

Serge:
   (Oh, hell, I think I
   know that voice...)

Fargo:
   Heave...

Fargo:
   HOOOOOO!!!

[Fargo pushes the bed out of the way, revealing a hole in the
floor, which the party then climbs up through.]

Fargo:
   Shiver me timbers!
   LYNX!?

Serge:
   (Oh, man, not again.)

Radius: [if present]
   Does he truly seem
   like Lynx to you?

Norris: [if present]
   The real Lynx would
   have entered through
   the door.

Serge:
   Look, just calm down, okay?
   (This is going to be tough.
   Fargo has this thing about
   jumping to conclusions...)
   Why would the real Lynx
   want to have a private talk
   with you so badly that he'd
   enter your cell through the
   sewers?

Fargo:
   I'd say that was
   for you to tell me.

Serge:
   (Oh, hell... I guess I'll
   just have to try something
   else. It's that or fight him.)

   What are you doing here, anyway?
   Did the Porreans capture your
   ship? (And if they did, what
   did they do with the parrot?)

[Fargo shakes his head]

Fargo:
   They caught me away from her
   when we put in to pick up
   supplies near the foot of Mount
   Pyre. Though I got the feelin'
   we weren't the ones they were
   lookin' for, if ya get what I
   mean. They'd never have taken
   me if I'd had me own decks under
   me feet.

Serge:
   Then I guess I don't have to
   worry about there being a huge
   parrot waiting out in the hall.
   (That's a relief.)

Fargo:
   Well, well, well. Maybe ya
   really aren't Lynx after all.
   He's never met Polly.

Serge:
   Actually, I'm Serge.

Fargo:
   You're SERGE?!
   ...Aye, that makes sense. I'd
   thought those rumours didn't
   sound much like the boy I'd met.
   This'd be somethin' the real
   Lynx did to you, then.

Fargo:
   But I'm honored that
   you would come save me.
   I owe ya one.

Serge:
   Actually, we didn't even know
   you were here. We broke in to
   rescue someone else.

Karsh:                       | Zoah:                | Glenn:         | Serge:
   Are you two done yakkin'  |    WE ARE LOOKING    |    We are here |    We promised we
   yet? If something happens |    FOR GENERAL       |    for Lady    |    would rescue
   to Riddel because we were |    VIPER'S DAUGHTER. |    Riddel.     |    Viper's daughter,
   wastin' time with this    |                      |                |    in return for the
   guy, you're gonna wish    |                      |                |    dragoons' help
   you'd never been born!    |                      |                |    with the real Lynx.
   
Fargo:
   Oh, is that so.
   Well, you ended up
   savin' me anyway.
   Let me help.

Serge:
   Do you know
   where she is?

Fargo:
   Aye...!
   A young lass was taken
   to the cell next door.

Serge:
   (Well, there aren't that many
   young women around here, and he
   knows Luccia, so he wouldn't be
   likely to mistake her for
   Riddel even if he decided she
   was "young".) Thanks, that
   sounds like it's probably her.

Fargo:
   Well, how do we
   get outta here?

Zoah:                 | Harle:                | Guile:              | Serge:
   ONE OF THE PORREAN |    By unlocking ze    |    We will use the  |    We've got a key
   OFFICERS WAS KIND  |    door wit' ze key.  |    key Norris gave  |    right here.
   ENOUGH TO GIVE US  |    Surely you did not |    us, of course.   |
   A KEY.             |    t'ink Monsieur     |    There is no      |
                      |    Lynx would come    |    mystery in that! |
                      |    here wit'out       |                     |
                      |    preparations!      |                     |

Fargo:
   Oh, great.

[Fargo takes the key, then walks over and opens the cell door.]

Fargo:
   I'm gonna go free the
   others and make me escape.
   Good luck to ya.

Serge:
   Thanks. (Although I'm hoping
   that, for once, we won't
   NEED to be lucky.)

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Dungeon, Viper Manor (Another)
===========================================================

[Riddel is chained at the far side of the room, with Hell Orcha standing near
her, and a bunch of Porreans scattered about.]

Porre Officer:
   This man is our secret
   weapon, Hell's Cook.

Riddel:
   You are the cook,
   Orcha!
   
Riddel:
   What have you
   done to him!?
   
Porre Officer:
   We had him eat some
   Quadffid seeds, found
   in Hydra Marshes.
   It has the power to
   release one's dark side.
   After that, we just ring
   a special bell and next
   thing you know, we have
   Hell's Cook, Orcha!

Riddel:
   How horrible...
   But why, Orcha...?

Porre Officer:
   We needed him to steal the
   Dragon's Tear from Guldove.
   Of course, his true self has
   no idea what he has done.
   
Porre Officer:
   Now prepare yourself!
   Who knows what this
   crazy man will do!

Riddel:
   NO!

[The party enters the room]

Karsh: [if present]
   Lady Riddel!!!
   I have come to
   save you!

Porre Officer:
   You are...Sir Lynx.
   But why are you here?

Serge:
   (Lynx would say... Ah, damn it,
   I don't know! Guess I'll just
   have to wing it.)

   We're here for the girl. She is
   urgently required elsewhere.

Porre Officer:
   I'm sorry, sir, but Colonel
   Davik gave me very specific
   orders--

Serge:
   (How the heck can I get him to
   leave the room? Wait, maybe...)
   This is important, you fool!
   If you can't release her, then
   go get Colonel Davik down here.
   Now! We're wasting time. (I hope
   he doesn't know Lynx all that
   well, 'cause that sounded more
   like a cross between Karsh and
   Norris, but if it works...)

Porre Officer:
   Hmph. I thought there was
   something odd about you.

Norris:            | Serge:
   Serge...this IS |    What do you mean?
   Colonel Davik.  |
                   | Porre Officer:
                   |    I am Davik. The real Lynx
                   |    would have known that.

Serge:
   (Oh, hell, the bastard set me
   up! What now? Say I've lost my
   memory? Yeah, right, like he'd
   believe that--)

Davik:
   Under the circumstances, I'm
   not about to let you anywhere
   near the girl. I'm sure you
   understand.

Karsh:               | Zoah:                           | Glenn:          | Serge:
   Who said anythin' |    THEN WE WILL BE TAKING       |    We will not  |    Sorry, but we
   about LETTIN' us? |    HER WITHOUT YOUR PERMISSION. |    leave her in |    can't leave her
                     |    I'M SURE YOU UNDERSTAND.     |    your hands.  |    here like this.

[The party pulls weapons.]

Serge:
   Get out of our way.

Davik:
   Orcha! Don't let them
   take the girl!

Orcha:
   Mwa-cha-cha-cha-cha!
   Don'tcha go interferin'
   with my cookin'!

Serge:
   (What the--)
   Hey, stop waving that
   cleaver around!

Orcha:
   Actually, you'll make a
   fine ingredient for my soup!

Serge:
   (Oh, hell, another one who just
   won't listen. Guess we'll have
   to do this the hard way.)

Orcha:
   Let's get cookin'!!!

[Combat. When it's over, Riddel is free of her chains and Orcha is back to normal,
but kind of sprawled on the floor.]

Davik:
   You people are...are...gah!
   Get out of my way!

[He heads for the door, then pauses and looks back just as he gets there.]

Davik:
   You haven't seen the last of
   me...and don't expect me to let
   you leave Viper Manor alive!

[He leaves.]

Serge:
   (I'd be a lot more impressed
   with the threats if he had
   done his own fighting.)

Norris: [if present]
   Davik always was rear-echelon
   material. I don't understand
   why the High Command placed
   him in charge of such a
   volatile situation.

[Orcha stirs.]

Orcha:
   Ughhh...
   I have a feelin' I've
   done somethin' terrible...

Riddel:
   Please. It was not
   your fault.

Orcha:
   Lady Riddel...I'm sorry,
   but it was, don'tcha see?
   They saw my gloatin' as a
   weakness and used me.
   I need more discipline...

Riddel:
   Was I any stronger than you?
   When the Porreans came, I could
   have used my magic to fight
   them, but I did not. And so I
   must also accept some of the
   blame for what happened here.

[Orcha stands up. So does Riddel.]

Serge:
   If you two are okay, we need
   to get out of here. (I want to
   be back in Termina before that
   Davik guy gets his act back
   together. That way, no one
   else will get hurt.)

[Orcha glances from Serge to Riddel]

Karsh:                             | Zoah:                     | Serge:
   Oh, fer... Just go back to the  |    RETURN TO THE KITCHEN. |    Just go back to the
   kitchen, okay? Act like someone |    THEY HAVE NO REASON TO |    kitchen. If anyone
   knocked ya on the head and ya   |    BELIEVE YOU WILL       |    asks, we left before
   don't remember anythin' 'bout   |    REMEMBER ANYTHING. WE  |    you woke up. Riddel is
   this. We'll make sure Riddel    |    WILL PROTECT LADY      |    safe with us--we came
   gets out of the Manor okay.     |    RIDDEL.                |    here to rescue her.

Orcha:
   Guess I don't have much of a
   choice. You all be careful on
   the way out, and if there's
   ever anythin' I can do for ya...

Serge:
   We'll let you know. (How many
   people is that now who've
   offered to help...?)

[Orcha leaves]

Riddel:
   Shall we go? Even though this
   is my home, I would prefer to
   be free of it before that
   horrible Porrean comes back.



Next time, we get to see Magus meet Belthasar, Davik get run over by his own mecha, and
the chocobo--oops, I mean dragon--stampede.

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Re: Chrono Helix (script)
« Reply #184 on: June 14, 2010, 02:01:36 pm »
Niiiice. I didn't have Karsh in my party for this scene, so this made me laugh. XD

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Riddel!!!                 
   Where is Lady Riddel!!!? 
   Bring her out, NOW!!!     
   You lay one filthy finger
   on her and you die!       
   ARGHHHHHH!   

He's so volatile...

Anyway, I loved it, yet again! Can't wait for the next!

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« Reply #185 on: June 14, 2010, 07:52:11 pm »
He's in love, poor bastard. Does he have any idea what kind of opportunity that gives me to mess with his head?

And thanks.

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Re: Chrono Helix (script)
« Reply #186 on: June 29, 2010, 08:57:48 pm »
Embarassingly, it's been so long since I posted the first part of the chapter that I couldn't
remember exactly where I left off without checking first.

Anyway, Magus and Belthasar finally meet, and several hints are dropped, along with oblique
references to Magus' stint as the Prophet in CT.



21. Back to Viper Manor - A captive audience awaits... Part II

   Max recruits: Lynx-Serge, Magus, Sprigg, Harle, Radius, Norris, Skelly,
        Guile OR Glenn, Karsh OR ZOAH, Starky.
   Recruitable: Grobyc. Luccia becomes re-recruitable after the end of the chapter.

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Entrance Hall, Viper Manor
===========================================================

[The party is instantaneously transported here after the end
of the previous scene.]

Norris[Another]:
   I will take it upon myself
   to make sure Riddel
   leaves the premises safely.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

[If Karsh is present, he looks at Riddel, then at Norris.]

Karsh:
   ...

Riddel:
   Oh, Karsh, please.
   I will be fine.

Karsh:
   You'd better be. Dario
   ain't here to look after
   you anymore, so I... I...

[Riddel gives Karsh a peck on the cheek.]

Riddel:
   You are so sweet...

[Karsh just covers the spot where she kissed him with his hand.]

Serge:
   (Heh. Yeah, I guess he is, at
   least to her. I wouldn't believe
   it if I hadn't seen it.)

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Norris[Another]:
   Please distract the soldiers
   while we make our escape.

Serge:
   (I suppose that having us split
   off and act as a decoy does make
   it more likely that Riddel will
   escape safely, but...) We can
   do that, but it might have been
   nice if you'd let us in on the
   plan before now.

Norris[Another]:
   ...
   My apologies. I am beginning
   to think I have been in the
   military far too long.

Norris[Home]: [if present]
   I admit, independent travel
   has been...something of an
   eye-opener for me.

Riddel:
   I would like to thank
   everyone from the bottom
   of my heart.
   I shall be heading to
   Hermit's Hideaway to
   take care of my father.
   Please be sure to stop by
   when you get the chance.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

[If Karsh is present]

Karsh:
   Don't worry 'bout us.
   I'll make sure to wipe out
   all these Porre buffoons!
   
Riddel:
   Thank you...
   Karsh.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Serge:
   So Norris, what are you going
   to do once you've gotten Riddel
   to Hermit's Hideaway?

Norris[Another]:
   I will be returning here.

Serge:
   Are you sure that's safe?
   I mean--

Norris[Another]:
   I have been very careful to
   avoid letting myself be seen
   in your company, you will note.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

[If Norris[Home] is in the party]

Serge:
   Yeah, but there's been A
   Norris with us, even if
   it wasn't you.

Norris[Another]:
   Then I will just have to spin
   the colonel a tale of impostors.
   He will buy into it--you may
   have noticed that he is not
   very bright, although it is
   disrespectful for me to say such
   things about a superior officer.

Norris[Home]:
   I doubt anyone here will be
   interested in tattling to him.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Norris[Home]:    | Radius:               | Sprigg:                  | Glenn:
   But you could |    Why don't you      |    Why don't ya come     |    I never thought I
   come with us. |    come with us?      |    with uz? It'z obvious |    would find myself
   We could use  |    If you have        |    yer skillz are        |    liking a Porrean,
   you.          |    your counterpart's |    bein' wasted 'ere.    |    but...why don't
                 |    skills, you could  |                          |    you come with us?
                 |    be a great help.   |                          |
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Skelly:                    | Guile:                  | Starky:
   Why don't ya come with  |    Do you feel yourself |    Starky thinks it would
   us? If you got yourself |    so strongly bound by |    be better if yooooou
   killed by that Davik    |    your orders as that? |    caaaame with Starky.
   guy, it would be a      |    It would be safer to |
   pretty bad joke.        |    come with us.        |
   
Norris[Another]:
   Thank you, I am honored.
   However, as a soldier of
   the Porre military, I cannot
   abandon my country or my men.

Serge:
   Well, if you're sure, I guess
   we can't stop you. (Even if I
   think you're crazy.)

Norris[Another]:
   I will be fine.
   Thank you.

Norris[Another]:
   I wish you the best of luck.

[Norris salutes]

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

[If Norris[Home] is in the party...]

Norris[Another]:
   When you get a chance,
   please come by and see
   me again, Norris...
   There is something
   I wish to give you.
   Good luck.

Norris[Home]:
   I will look forward
   to our next meeting.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Norris[Another]:
   We must hurry.

   We cannot be caught
   here together.

Riddel:
   Good-bye...

Serge: [if Karsh is present]
   (Karsh looks like he wants to go
   with them so badly...but Davik
   knows he's with me, and if we
   separate now, there's no point
   in us acting as decoys in the
   first place.)

[Norris and Riddel leave.

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Upper Hall, Viper Manor
===========================================================

[There are several Porrean soldiers disposed around the room, aiming
guns at the party as they enter.]

Karsh:                      | Guile:             | Harle:           | Serge:
   AARGH! How did we manage |    It appears we   |    Zut! Zey have |    (Surrounded?! Damn.
   to get surrounded by     |    are surrounded. |    blocked all   |    Guess we're going
   these idiots?            |                    |    ze exits!     |    to have to fight
                            |                    |                  |    our way out.)
 
[Colonel Davik and two soldiers walk in from the entrance the party used, cutting
them off.]

Davik:
   Where might you be
   off to, Sir Lynx?

Serge:
   I... Oh, screw it. At this
   point, I doubt there's anything
   I could say that you would
   believe. (There isn't even any
   point in thinking about what the
   real Lynx would say, because
   he'd never let himself end up
   in this situation.)

Davik:
   Heheheh, you're
   probably right.
   Seize them!!!

[Combat with the Porreans. They don't take long to kill, but Davik and his
guards aren't part of the fight and are still blocking the way back downstairs
when it ends.]

Davik:
   Argh... Hmmm...
   Hey! You're up!

Serge:
   (There's more of them?)

[Grobyc, who was leaning against a wall near the back of the room,
walks over to confront the party.]

Norris: [if present]
   Grobyc...

Grobyc:
   You-are-strong.

Serge:
   Uh, thanks. (What's with this
   guy? His voice is so completely
   flat... It's weird.)

Grobyc:
   But-Grobyc-is-stronger.

Serge:
   I guess that means you want to
   fight. (Not that we have a
   choice--I doubt we'll be going
   anywhere until we get rid of
   every single Porrean on this
   floor. I just hope we can handle
   this, or at least stall things
   for long enough for Riddel to
   get away.)

Grobyc:
   You-are-observant.
   You-fight-Grobyc.

[Combat with Grobyc. When the party wins, the two guards who
entered with Davik run away.]
 
Davik:
   Hey!
   Where are you...?
   
   Damn!
Cowards! How could
   the High Command have sent
   me so many fools?!

Serge:
   (Maybe they thought you'd be
   offended if they sent you anyone
   smarter than you are?)

[Davik runs over to the suit of powered armour that is blocking the way
into the right-hand tower.]
 
Davik:
   Heheheh...
   It's time for this baby...

   NOW GO!
   Go and destroy them!
   
   MOVE IT!

[Davik kicks the armour several times, and it begins to move,
pushing him along in front of it.]

 [Guillot]
   GA-GA-HYO...
   GA-PI-PI...

Serge:
   (Did we fight something like
   this the first time we broke
   in here, or am I getting it
   confused with something we ran
   into in the Dead Sea? There's
   been so MUCH Weird going on
   around me lately that it's
   getting all scrambled together
   in my head...)

Davik:
   AHHH!
   Hey, wait...

[The Guillot runs Davik over, and then walks up to the party and initiates
combat. When the combat is over, the party walks around the hulk
of the Guillot, headed for the entrance, but then the mechanical limbs
suddenly begin to twitch again...]

Zoah:                 | Karsh:           | Norris:                    | Starky:
   TYPICAL PORREAN    |    Whaaa?! It's  |    They were talking about |    Simple things are
   ARMAMENT. IT       |    still alive?! |    a prototype with self-  |    tough. Staarky will
   DOESN'T KNOW       |                  |    repair systems when I   |    reeeemember.
   WHEN TO STAY DEAD. |                  |    was last home. This     |
                      |                  |    must be it.             |
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Radius:                 | Sprigg:                | Glenn:
   If this sort of      |    And 'umanz say      |    Is there no way to
   opponent is becoming |    magic is monstrous. |    kill this...thing?
   more common now, I   |    Maybe it'z time for |
   am glad I retired    |    us to get out of    |
   when I did.          |    'ere.               |

Davik:
   Over here!

Serge:
   Let's run!

[The party heads for the door leading to the library tower, with the
Guillot in pursuit.]

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Library, Viper Manor (Another)
===========================================================

[The party runs into the room with the Guillot in hot pursuit.]

Serge:
   Oh, hell, I forgot! There's
   no other way out of here,and
   that thing is right behind us!
   
Prophet:
   Go up!
   Keep going!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

[If Magus is present, he stops dead in his tracks and turns to face Belthasar]

Magus:
   You!

Serge:
   (I guess that means they do
   know each other--and from the
   looks of it, Magus doesn't
   remember the Prophet fondly.)

Prophet:
   Do I...know you, sir?

Magus:
   Don't stall, Belthasar, you old
   buzzard! What are you doing
   here?! Lavos should have flung
   you to the distant future!

Prophet:
   !
   That voice...
   So you were a time traveller.
   That explains how you knew what
   you did of what was then Zeal's
   future.

Magus:
   And you've been using the same
   trick to play prophet here,
   haven't you. What are you
   plotting? This entire business
   has your fingerprints all--
   Damn!

[The Guillot pounds forward and initiates an additional combat, since I'm
not nice enough to give the PCs a break here. When it's over, the Guillot
is on the floor again, but it's also already twitching...]

Serge:
   We need to find another way out
   before that thing gets up again.

Prophet:
   As I said, go up...

[Most of the party starts up the stairs again, but Magus doesn't move]

Magus:
   You had best be here when I
   get back, old man, or when I
   find you, I will make you wish
   you had never been born.

Serge:
   Janus, please!
   We don't have
   time!

Belthasar:
   !!!

[Magus starts floating up the stairs, fast enough to catch up with the other characters.
When he passes Serge, the latter stumbles.]

Serge:
   (Ulp! Did he really just mutter
   something about turning me into
   a frog?!)

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

[The party hits the top of the ramp/staircase that encircles the walls of
the library.]

Karsh:               | Sprigg:              | Harle:             | Norris:
   I know there's a  |    Doezn't look like |    It seems zhere  |    It appears we are
   way to lower that |    there'z any way   |    is no escape... |    trapped. Sir, if
   stupid ladder,    |    out from 'ere...  |    What do we do,  |    you have some plan
   but what the heck |    Should 'ave taken |    Monsieur Lynx?  |    of action, please
   is it?!           |    thoze flying      |                    |    tell us now.
                     |    lessonz when I    |                    |
                     |    'ad the chance.   |                    |
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Guile:               | Zoah:                | Serge:
   If there is an    |    I CANNOT REMEMBER |    There's no way
   exit here, its    |    HOW TO LOWER THE  |    out here, either!
   location is a     |    LADDER...WE WILL  |    (And no time to
   mystery, and      |    HAVE TO FIGHT IT  |    look for one--damn,
   we have no time   |    AGAIN.            |    I'm going to KILL
   to search for it. |                      |    that old guy!)

[The Guillot initiates another combat. When it's over, it's in a heap
on the floor. Belthasar walks up to it and speaks to the party across
the twitching hulk.]

Prophet:
   There is a button that lowers
   the ladder inside the bookshelf.

Prophet:
   Hurry!
   You have little time!

Serge:
   (So nice of him
   to finally figure
   that out!)

[The button is pushed, and the ladder comes down. As the party climbs to the level
above, the Guillot rises to its feet again.]

Serge:
   (Whew--safe! There's no way
   it can get up here: it's
   too heavy for the ladder.)

[The Guillot jumps onto the chandelier.]

Serge:
   You've got to
   be kidding me!

Skelly: [if present]
   I don't think so. Nope,
   nothing funny about
   this. At all!

[Grobyc climbs up the ladder to join the party.

Grobyc:
   Step-aside.

Norris:              | Serge:
   Don't be foolish! |    Are you crazy?! (He expects
   What do you think |    to fight that thing while he's
   you can do?       |    hanging one-handed from the
                     |    chandelier?! Okay, so he's
                     |    tough, but no one is THAT tough.)

[Grobyc jumps into the chandelier and cuts through the rope holding it up, causing
both himself and the Guillot to plummet to the floor below.

Serge:
   (I don't believe this! He just--
   Why would he do something like
   that?! This just keeps getting
   crazier and crazier!)

 [Porre Soldiers]
   Over here!
   They're up there!

   We got 'em now!

Serge:
   (Groan) I'm starting to think
   they've moved the entire Porrean
   military here. This is endless!

Prophet:
   Break through the window!
   Do it, now!

[The party runs at the stained glass window and jumps through it, breaking it
in the process. If Magus was not in the party, the scene moves to the stable at
this point. If he was, the camera pans back down to Belthasar, who is sort of staring
into space.]

Prophet:
   I couldn't believe it at first,
   but...once you get past the
   strangeness, he looks very much
   like his father. I had always
   assumed that he was dead. She...
   Was she keeping this from me?
   Or is he an impostor?

Prophet:
   But...if he truly is Prince
   Janus...

   If he is, he puts my plans at
   risk. FATE cannot predict the
   actions of a time traveller.
   Which certainly explains the
   anomalies that kept calling me
   away from here!

[Belthasar begins to pace, as the Porreans mill around on the staircase and the top
level, by the window.]

Prophet:
   I doubt I can detach him from
   Serge now, but Serge knows
   nothing except what I have
   permitted him to know. Left
   to himself, Janus will hopefully
   follow the same path as his
   companions until he and I meet
   again. I must not permit that
   to happen too soon. She would
   hate it if I were to fight him.
   No, I must go into hiding until
   the time is right...and prepare
   myself for the consequences, for
   I doubt he will take my absence
   well.

   But unless my plan reaches
   fruition, there will be no
   saving her...or anything else.

[And now we cut to the stable.]

===========================================================
Stable, Viper Manor (Another)
===========================================================

[After dropping through the stained glass window, the party lands in a pile
of hay at the back of the stables, a hole in the roof having been provided
as a Convenient Plot Device (TM). The dragons are understandably a bit startled
by this, and are milling around in their stalls as the stablekeeper approaches
from the front of the building.]

 [Stablekeeper]
   What the...!?
   Where did you come from?

Serge:
   Um, sorry for dropping in like
   this... (Oh, man, that sounds
   dumb...) We were trying to
   get away from some Porreans.

 [Stablekeeper]
   Sir Lynx!
   Sounds like you ran into
   some trouble up there.

Serge:
   You could say that. (I never
   thought I would be happy to meet
   another Lynx fan.)

 [Stablekeeper]
   What are you gonna do?
   The Porre soldiers are
   all over the place.

Serge:
   Well, um...

   ~~~Take 'em all on!      |    ~~~Hehehehe...
                            |
Serge:                      | Serge:
   (I don't like it, but    |    (Oops, I kind of let that slip
   what else can we do?)    |    out...hope I'm not losing it.
                            |    It's just that it feels like
[Stablekeeper]              |    this should be the punchline
   Don't be reckless, now.  |    of a bad joke.)
   I have an idea.          |
   Leave it to me.          | [Stablekeeper]
                            |    Ohhh... That...!
Serge:                      |    Hahahaha...
   (If he has an idea, he's |    This should be interesting...
   doing better than I am.) |    OK, leave it to me.
                            |
                            | Serge:
                            |    (I wish I had some idea what
                            |    he thought I meant...)

[The stablekeeper leaves the party and heads for the front of the building. If Magus
is not in the party, the scene immediately changes. But if he is...]

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Serge:
   Magus?

Magus:
   What do you want?

Serge:
   I couldn't follow a lot of what
   you were saying back there, but
   the Prophet...you called him
   Belthasar?

Magus:
   Prophet? Is that what he's
   claiming to be? Heh. What irony.

   I called him Belthasar because
   that is his name. Like me, he
   is of Zeal. He held the title of
   Guru of Reason there, although
   he had...something of a falling-
   out with the throne in the last
   chaotic days of the kingdom.

Serge:
   And you think that he's
   responsible for everything
   that's been happening--my
   falling into this world, Lynx,
   Kid, the Dragon Tear, the
   Dead Sea...

Magus:
   It may seem far-fetched, but
   he was considered a genius, and
   if he landed as far into the
   future in this history as he did
   in the old one, he would have
   been able to find those capable
   of helping him create such a
   plan. His involvement makes
   sense of all the little details
   that had been bothering me, like
   the pocket dimension and the
   presence of an installation from
   the future in the Dead Sea.

   The one thing I still don't
   understand is the PURPOSE of all
   of this. He can't be doing it
   for no reason.

Serge:
   I'm starting to be...kind of
   sorry that I couldn't let you
   strangle some answers out of
   him back there.

Magus:
   Had I truly wanted to do so,
   you wouldn't have been able to
   stop me...although I suppose
   I would have had to slaughter
   all those Porreans. In the days
   when I was leading the Mystics
   against Guardia, I probably
   wouldn't have hesitated, young
   fool that I was.

~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-

[If Guile is present, he chimes in at this point]

Guile:
   Do you mean you were
   also...THAT Magus?

Magus:
   I suppose I never did mention
   that part. Yes, you managed to
   name me...after myself. A fine
   bit of irony. No wonder the
   name felt right!

~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-

[And if Sprigg is there...]

Sprigg:
   So Lord Magus waz a 'uman all
   along. Joke'z on us, I suppoze.

Magus:
   Well, Ozzie never was very
   bright. In his world, only the
   Mystics had magic...so the fact
   that I had magic meant to him
   that I could not possibly be
   human, no matter what I looked
   like.

~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-

Magus:
   If you really must know, the
   main thing that kept me from
   wringing Belthasar's neck was
   the thought that he might have
   planned that, too. He's twisty
   enough. And I dislike being
   manipulated. No, I'll wait until
   I know what's going on. THEN
   I'll kill him, if it still seems
   like a good idea.

Serge:
   (Not going to TOUCH that one.)
   So you're going to--

Magus:
   --continue keeping an eye on
   you. Why not? I've come this
   far. And besides, the old
   buzzard seems to be quite
   interested in you. I expect
   there's a reason for that, too.

   It must be something to do with
   the Frozen Flame. All the paths
   lead back to it one way or the
   other. No doubt we will find out
   more when we finally reach the
   Sea of Eden.

[Fadeout.]
 
===========================================================
Courtyard, Viper Manor (Another)
===========================================================

[When the picture fades back in, we are watching several Porreans close in on the stable.]

 [Porre Soldier]
   Over here!
 
 [Porre Soldier]
   Huh? What was that noise?

[The stable doors are flung violently from their hinges, and the dragons that
were inside stampede out, running over the Porreans in the process. A few moments
later the party emerges]

Serge:
   Heheheh... (Oh, man, this is
   great. We can just walk straight
   out the front.)

[Grobyc approaches.]

Norris:                           | Serge:
   Grobyc... I do not understand  |    (Oh, hell, it's the crazy guy
   why you saved us. I...was not  |    who likes fighting and
   aware that you were capable of |    chandeliers.) What do you want?
   making an independent choice   |
   of that nature.                |

Grobyc:
   You-oppose-the
   Porre-military.
   Grobyc-finds
   that-interesting.

Serge:
   (I wonder if anyone's ever told
   him that he has a weird
   definition of "interesting"?)

Grobyc:
   Grobyc-only-takes
   orders-from-one-who
   is-stronger.

Grobyc:
   Thus-Grobyc-will-join
   you-in-your-battle.

 [System]
   Grobyc-joined-your-party.

Serge:
   (Oh, great. Just what we need:
   a crazy Porrean cyborg assassin
   following us around.)

Grobyc:
   Call-upon-Grobyc
   whenever-you-need-help.

Serge:
   Uh... Yeah, right. (I know I've
   said more than once that we can
   use all the help we can get, but
   I don't want to think about just
   how bad things would have to be
   before I would rely on this guy.

Zoah:                   | Skelly:           | Norris:                  | Karsh:
   WE SHOULD LEAVE NOW. |    Now that we've |    I believe this would  |    Time to leave,
   THERE IS LITTLE MORE |    got a path to  |    be a good time to     |    before we run into
   WE CAN DO HERE, AND  |    the gates, we  |    retreat, before Davik |    any more of those
   LADY RIDDEL MUST BE  |    should get out |    realizes he should    |    idiots. I hope
   MILES AWAY.          |    of heah!       |    lock the gates.       |    Riddel's okay.
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Radius:                     | Sprigg:                       | Glenn:
   We would be well-advised |    We should leave before     |    We should leave. Lady
   to leave before they can |    anyone noticez we're still |    Riddel must be clear
   regroup.                 |    around.                    |    of this place by now.

Serge:
   I guess you're right.
   (Hermit's Hideaway, here
   we come!)




I'm sure there's at least one error in this somewhere, given that I've been kind of preoccupied
with other stuff lately.

Next we will have another installment of side stuff. The Radius/Sprigg dialogue is definitely
going to make it in this time, along with Nikki's re-recruitment sequence and the
Grobyc/Norris/Luccia history thing.

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Re: Chrono Helix (script)
« Reply #187 on: June 29, 2010, 10:47:37 pm »
XD "Named me after myself."

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« Reply #188 on: June 29, 2010, 11:14:53 pm »
Prophet:
   !
   That voice...
   So you were a time traveller.
   That explains how you knew what
   you did of what was then Zeal's
   future.

Is Belthasar supposed to recognize him as the Prophet? At least not in person I think (due to Chronopolis time/dimensional-watching), as that version of Belthasar is a TB.

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« Reply #189 on: June 29, 2010, 11:25:35 pm »
XD "Named me after myself."

It may be just me, but that line almost seemed like vintage Woosley. :P

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Re: Chrono Helix (script)
« Reply #190 on: June 30, 2010, 09:26:49 pm »
@skylark: Heh. Well, it is Woolsey's translation of the games that I'm most familiar with.

@Acacia Sgt: I did say that there was probably a mistake in there somewhere. >_<;;;

Yes, Belthasar is recognizing him as the Prophet. I could claim that Belthasar slipped back in time to the Fall of Zeal in an abortive attempt to fix things (and wasn't noticed because everyone assumed he was the contemporary Belthasar) and that he met Magus-as-Prophet there, but the real truth is that I didn't even think about applying Time Bastard to the matter (and, well, in the end, TB is a fan theory--albeit a good one--rather than an absolute confirmed truth of the Chronoverse, so I consider it to be arguable whether ignoring it constitutes a genuine mistake. Just call me a heretic, if you like.)

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« Reply #191 on: June 30, 2010, 11:12:00 pm »
It's okay, besides, either way, Belthasar visiting Zeal can make sense since that's why he was building the Epoch in the future for, to return there.

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« Reply #192 on: July 01, 2010, 12:42:23 am »
Next we will have another installment of side stuff. The Radius/Sprigg dialogue is definitely
going to make it in this time...

Oh! I thought you had put it in ages ago and I'd missed it somehow! You'd said a couple updates ago that 'it's in the next one' and then never really mentioned it again, so I was just like "Hmm, I'll have to re-read sometime..."

...but ok yeah! Sprigg/Radius!

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« Reply #193 on: July 01, 2010, 09:28:58 pm »
@Katie Skyye: What happened was that it was supposed to be in the next update, but I essentially ran out of space. For logistical reasons, I try not to post more than 1000 or so lines of script at a time.

It will definitely be in the next update this time, because I've already written it and it's at the top of the pile--it's Nikki's re-recruitment sequence that's getting bumped instead, because it can't actually happen until either Marcy or Fargo has been recruited.

So, next posting will be Radius and Sprigg, Luccia's re-recruitment/the Luccia, Norris, and Grobyc flashback scene, and probably either or both of the hunt for Karsh's final tech and the script for the Grand Slam, depending on space.

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« Reply #194 on: July 28, 2010, 08:45:23 pm »
Oy vey. This took much longer than it should have, mostly because I had to tear out and
re-write the Luccia scene several times in order to get it anything even approaching
right. I mean, I knew what I wanted to do with it, but it kept getting too long-winded
and bogged down in unnecessary details. I just hope the current version isn't too much of a
cliche.

Anyway, Radius and Sprigg did make it in this time, although their conversation did
not end up going quite as I had envisioned (damned characters always have minds of their
own).



5. Tea for Two, AKA the Old Bats' Convention

[This could happen at any time after recruiting Karsh/ZOAH (whichever the player decides
to get first). The only other requirement is spending the night at the inn in Termina[Home]
with both Radius and Sprigg in the party. If those conditions are fulfilled, and this
scene hasn't happened yet, after everyone dozes off, the player is taken to...]

======================================================
The Dragon's Tail (Home)
======================================================

[Radius is sitting at a table when Sprigg walks in.]

Sprigg:
   Heh, I see ya couldn't
   sleep either.

Radius:
   My old bones don't find the beds
   at the inn as soft as they used
   to, so I thought I would slip
   out so as not to disturb the
   youngsters.

Sprigg:
   Young 'umanz really do
   need a ridiculous amount
   of rest.

Radius:
   Pardon me, I seem to be
   forgetting my manners. Would
   you care to join me?

Sprigg:
   Thought you'd never ask.

[She sits down across from him.]

Sprigg:
   Ya did promise you'd tell
   me what Karsh did to those
   chickenz.

Radius:
   Just one chicken, actually.
   It happened sort of like this...

[Fadeout, because I still don't know what Karsh did
to that chicken, except, well, er... Anyway, when the scene
fades back in, Sprigg and Radius are both shaking with laughter.]

Radius:
   And so...when we finally managed
   to get Karsh out of the boat...
   the hen was nesting in his hair.
   The look on his face when the
   egg rolled off his nose...
   Never seen anything like...
   Ho, ho, ho!

Sprigg:
   Heheheh, soundz like somethin'
   me youngest might 'ave done when
   'e woz that age.

Radius:
   You have children?

Sprigg:
   Four by me first 'usband and
   two by the second. By the time
   I married the third, I woz too
   old for any of that nonsense,
   thankfully, and by the time 'e
   passed away, I figured I didn't
   need the 'usband, either.

[Radius shakes his head.]

Radius:
   I can't pretend to understand,
   since I never married. Glenn
   and Dario are my only children.
   I...have often wondered what
   I missed by deciding to
   concentrate on my swordsmanship
   rather than starting a family.

Sprigg:
   Less than ya think, maybe.
   Do ya know why I left Medina?

Radius:
   You haven't spoken of it, as
   far as I know.

Sprigg:
   I didn't figure it woz
   important, but now, maybe...
   I left becauze they were tryin'
   to grandmother me to death.

Radius:
   I...don't understand.

Sprigg:
   Think about it. Grandmotherz...
   are supposed to sit in the sun
   an' babysit their grandkidz...
   an' not embarass their children.
   I don't mind babysittin' a bit,
   but sittin' in the sun doin'
   nothin' izn't me thing.

Radius:
   It can be difficult to move from
   an active life to one of
   advising others. I never
   expected I would find my quiet
   life in Arni fulfilling, but
   ...I have.

Sprigg:
   Then wot are ya doin' 'ere?
   Seemz to me that ya gave up
   the "quiet life" the first
   chance ya got.

[Radius shakes his head]

Radius:
   Perhaps you are right, but...
   I didn't leave entirely for my
   own sake.

Sprigg:
   Ya wanted to 'elp your family.
   Knowin' that young Glenn woz
   alive in the other world, ya
   couldn't 'ave done anythin'
   other than try to 'elp.

Radius:
   That, and I wanted to help
   Serge. He never deserved to
   get involved in this mess.

Sprigg:
   'E seems to be holdin' up well
   enough, for all of that. Though
   'e is a bit impulsive now and
   then.

Radius:
   I don't know. He behaves more
   sensibly than I did at that age,
   although that isn't saying much.

Sprigg:
   Heh. Bit of a 'ellraiser,
   were ya?

Radius:
   Well...

Sprigg:
   Heheheh, bet ya were.
   Shame there's no one left
   that can tell me about it.

Radius:
   I would wager that you
   STILL raise hell, now
   and again.

Sprigg:
   Ya might be right, at that.
   Traveling with all these young
   folk makes me feel young meself.
   Better than a life inside some
   brat'z scribble-drawin', that's
   for sure. Never should've gone
   down that alley...

Radius:
   Alley?

Sprigg:
   I ended up where Serge found me
   after gettin' 'it over the 'ead
   in an alley in Porre. Still
   don't know why, unless someone
   didn't like me charmin'
   personality. It'z funny, though,
   that that Lynx and 'iz pet knew
   where that weird place I got
   stashed woz. Very funny indeed.

[Sprigg picks a glass up off the table, looks into it, and flips it upside down.]

Sprigg:
   All dry from talkin' and nothin'
   to fix it with--that'll never
   do. Bartender! 'Ey! Bring me
   the best in the 'ouse!

Radius:
   Are you sure you can afford it?
   Wine imported from the continent
   can be quite expensive here.

Sprigg:
   It izn't like I can take the
   money when the time comez, and
   my kidz don't need it, so why
   not live it up a little? The
   problem with you, Radius, iz
   that you're too responsible.
   Ya need to learn to relax, or
   you'll be dead before you're
   a 'undred, and you 'umanz don't
   live nearly long enough to
   begin with. Come on now, 'ave
   a drink.

[The bartender brings a bottle, and the scene fades out as Sprigg starts trying to
get Radius to take his hand off his glass so that she can fill it.]

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6. The Making of a Cyborg

[To get this scene, Riddel must have been rescued, Luccia must have been recruited
during the early part of the game, Serge must still be Lynx and must have
spoken to Luccia while Lynx, and the two Norrises must have met at some point.
If these conditions are met, then the next time the party rests, we are whisked to a
scene in the nighttime version of Viper Manor's rooftop sitting area/garden/pond thing.
Luccia is standing by the edge of the pond, staring into it as though she expects the
secrets of the universe to rise out of it, when Norris walks in.]

Norris:
   When I failed to find you in
   your lab, I wondered where you
   were hiding. I suppose I should
   have checked the most unlikely
   spot first.

Luccia: [without turning]
   Go avay.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

[If the scenelet with Luccia finding the "dishwasher" caught
in her cage trap occurred...]

Norris:
   I wanted to thank you for not
   turning me in to the Dragoons
   when I got caught in that cage
   trap. I should have known that
   you would be able to tell I
   wasn't just another dishwasher.

Luccia:
   Dat vas you?

Norris:
   You mean you didn't recognize
   me? Well, it has been years.
   I suppose it isn't surprising.

[Luccia shakes her head]

Luccia:
   I did not know you at all. I
   merely t'ought de new dishwasher
   vas an idiot.

Norris:
   Well, I WAS trying to make him
   look like one--idiots can get
   away with poking into all kinds
   of interesting places.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Norris:
   Are you trying to hide
   from Grobyc? I met him in
   your lab.

Luccia:
   Nyet! I am not hiding.

Norris:
   I suppose that proves that you
   are a stronger person than I am,
   because I AM hiding from him.

Luccia:
   You...? Vhy? He did not seem
   to disturb you in de old days.
   I remember vhen Aleiki first
   showed him to you--you never
   even blinked.

Norris:
   I suppose that meeting the
   Norris from the other world has
   affected my thinking a bit.
   After all, I could have been
   him if history had played out
   slightly differently. I had
   begun to allow myself to forget
   about some things.

Luccia:
   I vish I could forget. If only
   Aleiki had not... Dere vere
   odder bodies available. He could
   have chosen someone else.

Norris:
   There were far too many
   bodies available that
   night, as I recall.

[Luccia finally turns around.]

Luccia:
   I did not need to be reminded
   of dat. Go AVAY, Norris.

Norris:
   Very well. Perhaps I will see
   you in the morning.

[Norris leaves. Luccia waits until he's gone, then walks past the pond to the railing at
the edge of the roof, and leans her elbows on it.]

Luccia:
   De day I failed to save Zelbess,
   de night dat Aleiki died, and...
   dat night. I am beginning to
   vish dere vas such a t'ing as a
   drug dat vould erase my
   memory...but den I vould forget
   him too, and Norris and I are
   de only ones left now dat
   remember.

[The camera pans up toward the night sky and the scene fades out. When it fades back in again,
we are in the laboratory from Luccia's Zelbess-related flashback, but there are bodies all
over the floor--some in Porrean uniforms, some probably recycled pirates from the S.S. Zelbess
again. A pool of some flammable liquid is burning in the background, and there is
blood spattered all over the place. The only two living people in the room are Luccia, and
a man in a Porrean uniform. The man has a distinctive hairstyle, like a cone sticking out from
behind his head. He has his hand on Luccia's arm, and appears to be trying to drag her
somewhere.]

???:
   Luccia, be reasonable. The
   entire complex has been overrun
   by the Guardian Resistance.
   We can't afford to wait any
   longer--every second reduces
   our chances of getting out
   alive.

Luccia:
   But Aleiki... I
   cannot leave my
   brodder, Milo!

Milo:
   I'm sure Aleiki's fine. If he
   was cut off from the labs, he
   probably had the sense to leave
   the building, and trust me to
   get you out.

Luccia:
   But...

Milo:
   No more buts, Luccia!

[Milo suddenly lunges forward, grabs Luccia by the shoulders, and kisses her.]

Milo:
   You know, the ring in my back
   pocket cost me almost a month's
   salary, and if you die here,
   it's going to be wasted.

[Luccia blushes.]

Luccia:
   All right, all right, ve
   vill go. But if Aleiki is
   not safe...

Milo:
   Then I'll come back in and look
   for him, but YOUR safety is what
   I'm most interested in right
   now. Come on!

[This time, Luccia lets him pull her toward the door. They're almost there when another
pirate/Guardian Resistance member suddenly appears in the doorway. Milo shoves Luccia behind
him as the other guy's gun comes up. The Porrean is shot twice in the chest, and we see
something small and sparkly fly from his back pocket, bounce, and then roll into a corner.
Luccia narrowly escapes being pinned under Milo as he falls, and ends up crouching beside him.]

Luccia:
   Milo!

[No response. Luccia rises to her feet and turns to face the doorway.]

Luccia:
   How dare you hurt him,
   you...!

[It would actually be nice to insert a Russian obscenity in there, but I don't know any, and
anyway, I don't think the CC dialogue font has Cyrillic characters in it... In any case,
Luccia fires off some Bronze Shot at the doorway.]

[Resistance member]
   Argh!

[He collapses onto the floor. Meanwhile, Luccia has gone back to Milo. She starts patting at her
pockets.]

Luccia:
   I must have somet'ing!
   A capsule, even a tablet...!

???:
   Luccia, are you alright?

[A man enters the room, stepping over the corpse. He looks very much like Luccia--same hair
colour (but in a shortish, shaggy, kind of retro cut), glasses (although his are square),
and wearing a lab coat. Norris enters behind him.]

Luccia:
   Aleiki... I am fine, but
   Milo is...

[Aleiki kneels down beside her, takes Milo's arm, and checks the pulse.]

Aleiki:
   I am sorry, Luccia.
   He is dead.

Luccia:
   Dat cannot be! I vill not
   allow it! Brodder, your
   research suggests dat--

Aleiki:
   Ve have not even begun animal
   testing on dat--and now is not
   de time to discuss it.

Norris:
   I agree. We must get out of
   here before the fire spreads.

Luccia:
   I vill not leave Milo!

Aleiki:
   Den I vill carry him--he vas
   my friend too, and he deserves
   better dan to share a pyre wit'
   his killers. Norris, help me get
   him up.

[As the two men bend over Milo's body, Luccia goes to the corner and picks up the sparkly
thing that fell from Milo's pocket, earlier. She clasps it to her chest and bows her head.]

Luccia:
   Milo...

[The scene fades out, and then we're in a different lab--one with a lot of glassware, counters,
etc. In the middle of the room is something roughly the size and shape of a coffin. Aleiki is
bending over it.]

Aleiki:
   Vital signs are...steady. De
   last infusion seems to have
   vorked. If dere are no changes
   overnight, perhaps I vill take
   him off life support tomorrow.

[Luccia enters the room.]

Luccia:
   Brodder? You had somet'ing
   you vanted me to see?

Aleiki:
   Da--the first successful
   result of my research.

Luccia:
   Den you have...?

Aleiki:
   Vell, I am not certain yet dat
   it vas a complete success--dat
   vill have to vait until ve can
   test de cognitive functions.
   But this one is definitely
   alive, or at least de organic
   parts are.

Luccia:
   And so you have
   brought life
   to de dead.

Aleiki:
   Da. I hope de High Command
   do not begin to mistake me
   for a god as de result!

Luccia:
   Ohohoho! If dey vant a god,
   dey could do vorse dan to
   choose you. Now, let me look.

[Luccia steps up beside Aleiki and looks down into the coffin...then raises her hand to her
mouth and backs away a couple of steps.]

Luccia:
   B-but dat is...!
   ...
   I vas at the funeral, and his
   coffin vas not empty. Did you
   dig up de body? His family vill
   not be pleased.

Aleiki:
   Dey do not need to know. Chances
   are dat he vill not remember dem
   anyvay. Tests show dat some
   neurons have not survived dese
   past t'ree years, despite the
   cryonics.

Luccia:
   Den...he is not likely to
   remember me eidder, is he?

Aleiki:
   I do not know. But you vere
   togedder vhen he died, so I
   vould say he is more likely to
   remember you dan anyvone alse.

[Suddenly, a blue hand appears over the edge of the coffin-like device, and both scientists
back away in apparent surprise.]

Aleiki:
   He may have more natural brain
   function dan I expected. He vas
   not suppose to vake on his own.

[A blue-skinned figure sits up from within the coffin. Obviously, it's Grobyc, but naked. In
particular, the bottom part of his face is not covered...so it's pretty obvious that he looks
exactly like Milo, except for the minor matter of being blue. He looks around the lab.]

[Grobyc]
   What-is-this-place?

Aleiki:
   Dis is a military research
   installation of the nation of
   Porre.

Luccia:
   Do you remember your name?

[Grobyc]
   This-unit's-codename-is-Grobyc.

Aleiki:
   Apparently some of our
   programming vorked--that is
   indeed the codename ve gave
   de project.

Luccia:
   But it appears dat dat is
   all he retains.

[She turns away from Grobyc and the coffin, facing in the general direction of the camera, and
Grobyc turns his head to stare at her back.]

Grobyc:
   Grobyc-is-confused.
   Something-is-not-right.

Aleiki:
   Do not concern yourself, Grobyc.
   Luccia...

Luccia:
   I am fine. I understand dat you
   vanted to help, but...dis vill
   not, CANNOT vork. Dis...is only
   de shell of de man I remember.

   ...I t'ink I vill ask for a
   transfer to de robotics
   division, if dat vill not
   distress you.

Aleiki:
   I understand, and I am
   sorry dat dis vas not
   more successful.

Luccia:
   ...

[Luccia clasps her hands to her chest, and something sparkles from between her fingers as the
scene fades out.]

Luccia:
   No matter vhat Lucca said in
   her letters, I do not t'ink dere
   is any vay to reclaim de past.
   I am being a fool for even
   t'inking about it. But I still
   miss him. More dan I miss
   Aleiki, even.

   ...A distraction vould do me
   good, I t'ink. Perhaps in de
   morning, I vill find Serge and
   rejoin his party. It vill keep
   me from having to share space
   vith...Grobyc, at least.

[She looks down at her hands, and something sparkles briefly on the right one as the scene
fades out and we get the normal party-change screen that pops up on recruitment.]

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7. Of Bunny-girls and Carrots

===========================================================
Grand Slam
===========================================================

[In order to participate in the Grand Slam, the party must go over and talk to the guy
guarding the entrance to the caged-in area.]

[Gate guard]
   The ultimate event of events,
   the "Grand Slam!!!"
   Monsters from all over the world
   are here to battle it out.

   You guys wanna participate?

Serge:
   Um... We don't have any
   monsters.

[Gate guard]
   Not to worry! The arena is
   equipped with the latest imaging
   system from Melchior-Ashtear
   Technologies! Just think of a
   monster you know, and the system
   will create it for you.

Serge:
   Hmmm, in that case...

    ~Sure, let's do it!              |    ~Not just yet...
                                 |
Serge:                               | Serge:
   (I mean, why not? Seems like      |    We're kind of busy right now.
   an interesting way to kill        |
   some time.)                       | [Gate guard]
                                     |    Not a problem! Come back when
                                     |    you can.
                                     |
                                     | [Scene ends for this branch]

[The gate guard moves aside, and the party walks over to the
gap in the bars on the right side of the arena.]

[Announcer]
   Our slogan...
   Fight with might and believe the hype!!!
   It's time to GET IT ON!

   Alright, we have a new
   challenger!
   Let's see what our new
   contestant can do!

Serge:
   (I'm starting to wonder what
   I've gotten myself into...)

Janice:
   Whoo-hoo...!
   Don't take me too lightly!

Serge:
   (She's their champion monster-
   handler? I didn't expect a
   demi-human, but whatever.)

[First battle.]

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

[If the player loses]

Janice:
   CHIC-KEN!!!

Serge:
   (If Leena had said that to me
   in that tone, I'd be doing
   something that would get me in
   trouble afterwards for hitting
   a girl. But in this case, I
   don't think I care enough to
   fight my way across a monster-
   infested pit just to deck her.)

[At this point, the player has the option of either restarting the
first battle or leaving the area.]

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

[If the player wins]

 [System]
   [Member] received
   Stamina Belt!

Serge:
   (Nice! They didn't say
   anything about prizes.)

Janice:
   Hey, not bad!
   But how about
   some of this!!!


[Second battle.]

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

[If the player loses]

Janice:
   Whoo-hoo!
   Good guys always win!

Serge:
   Um...Excuse me? Who's the "good
   guy" here?

   (...I don't think she's
   listening.)

[The player can now either start the second battle over, or leave.]

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

[If the player wins]

 [System]
   [Member] received
   Resistance Belt!

Janice:
   Eeeeyaow!!!
   Don't make me mad!
   This is it!
   And I'm gonna win!!!

Serge:
   (She's taking this way too
   seriously. I mean, it's only
   a game!)

[Third battle.]

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

[If the party loses]

Janice:
   I have to say, you put
   up a good fight! But you're
   still not ready for me!

Serge:
   (I'm starting to get a bit
   tired of her.)

[Again, the player can either fight again, or leave.]

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

[If the party wins]

   [Member] received
   Dream's Scarf!

Janice:
   I can't believe I lost...
   NO WAY...!!!

Serge:
   (She really is way too
   into this.)

[As the party attempts to depart, Janice jumps the pit railing and darts around in
front of them.]

Janice:
   Hey, hey!!!
   Don't go!
   I wanna ask you
   guys somethin'!
   Where did you find such
   super-duper monsters!?

[Serge shrugs.]

Serge:
   Around. I think we've covered
   most of El Nido, what with
   everything that's been going on.

Janice:
   Oh. I thought maybe you might
   have been...THERE!

Serge:
   There?

Janice:
   They say there's this hidden
   island where you can fight any
   kind of monster in the entire
   archipelago, plus some special
   ones that you can't find
   anywhere else! I wanna go there
   so baaaad...but I've been
   sailin' around on this stupid
   boat forever without findin'
   it! I'm startin' to think that
   maybe it isn't real, y'know?

Sprigg:                            | Serge:
   Heheheh... Maybe you're lookin' |    Well, if it's hidden, it
   in the wrong placez, kiddo.     |    stands to reason that it
   That island ain't that eazy     |    would be difficult to find,
   to find.                        |    right?

Janice:
   Hmmm, maybe this boat is too
   big, then... I know! I'll steal
   the lifeboat! Thanks, people,
   you made my day!

[Serge facepalms as Janice scurries off]

Serge:
   (Why do I think that talking
   to her maybe wasn't such a
   good idea?)



In case it wasn't sufficiently clear, yes, Janice is talking about the Bend of Time. (And as for
"Melchior-Ashtear Technologies"... It can be warped around to conform to reality if you assume that
Melchior and Lucca developed some kind of (possibly magic-augmented) holographic technology, tried
to market it, and then lost control of the company before they made any money off it, but it was
primarily meant to be a joke.)

The expected order of the next few posts is:
1. Chapter 22 (may have to be split into two parts)
2. Side-stuff: various Karsh/Dario/Riddel-related material
3. Chapter 23 (don't know if I'll need to split this)
4. Side-stuff: the Save Marbule quest
5. Side-stuff: Nikki's re-recruitment, Orlha's recruitment (still waffling on this), misc. fragments

That's subject to change without notice, of course. We're getting surprisingly close to the end...