I suppose I could subject you to that degree of criticism, if you wish. There isn't nearly enough urine in Zeal to account for the water loss. In this, your idea suffers from the same problem as the atmospheric condensation idea--insufficient input--and is toast.
Furthermore, a wax candle may not do well at the elevations under consideration, but when dealing with the large quantities of molecular oxygen presupposed by your machine description, the condition of thin atmosphere is superseded. Additionally, with molecular hydrogen nearby, the fire risks are even more enormous: You've got a highly combustible fuel gas (hydrogen) and one of nature's most powerful oxidizers (oxygen), sitting nearby each other. I misspoke earlier when talking about the balloons. I did mention that hydrogen is flammable, but I neglected to specify that oxygen is not, that it is, instead, the other half of a combustion. And there was a fourth balloon in that classroom, containing a hydrogen-oxygen mixture, and that was the one that shook my bones--not the pure oxygen balloon--but that is neither here nor there. The bottom line is that the fire risks are real in your design.