[I'm trying to teach myself Latin, as there's no class for it here. I can't find any good set rules for sentence structure.
It's supposed to be, loosely, "All you people are so scared of me", and "You're not afraid of the dark, are you?"
The second one, translated literally, reads "Darkness you fear not, you are?" Sorry if it's bothering you, I'll fix it when I can find some better source of grammar rules.
Heh, always a good endeavour! To be lauded! Heh.
Ah, hm, true, you need a good grammar source. I was basically getting what you said, I just wasn't sure on a few of the finer points. Like, hm, make sure that if you are addressing a people, and they fear something, the thing they fear goes into the accusative, as in English. So you say 'you fear ME.' rather than 'I'. Ego is the Latin I, so you want the Latin 'me.' This is, well, 'me', actually. Heh. The problem is you've given yourself terribly difficult sentences. Something like putting 'so' in is a very precise construction implying almost a sarcastic superlative or something. You have to have some pretty intricate grammar books and examples to show you how to convey something like that, otherwise you'll just end up saying, say, 'very scared.'
For the second one, yeah, after giving it a second glance, and seeing what was written under your avatar, I supposed you might be trying to say that. It's close, but there's a lot of idiomatic things you'd have to put into such a sentence like that that I wouldn't know off hand, and I've been doing this for quite a few years. I've even composed my own Latin elegies, but I'd still need my grammars and my dictionaries.
Uh, hm, okay, first the question you have to ask (this is for the second) what the number you are speaking to is. It's probably singular, right? (Ie. you're asking one person 'you're not afraid of the dark') In that case... well, you definitely have the verb right, but you would only need make it singular, say, times, rather than timetis (which is fine if you wish the plural, by the way.) Now how to form a question... well, one way of doing this is to add -ne to the first word (according to my grammar book.) And as for what you fear, well, this is a little difficult. In English we're constructing in a weird way. We're constructing it using an adjective (fear) a verb (are) and a genetive of what is feared. But I don't think Latin would be constructed in that way. I rather think they would say more directly 'You do not fear the dark, do you?' Then darkness becomes the direct object, so tenebrae is tenebras. Therefore, 'you do not fear the dark?' is 'tenebrasne non times.'
But then I'm a little lost. See, it's a weird idom in English to repeat the question to imply an expected affirmation. I'd have to search for an equivalent idiom in Latin, because this is getting a little hairier than the stricter grammar.
Oh, heh, I absolutely love my grammar book. It has an entry for just such a 'are you?' construction! It's introduced with 'num'. So basically, it would be 'num tenebras times?' (it seems the 'not fear' is included in the num.)
Yeah, not sure if that helps. I've gotta look these things up myself each time, even after doing a lot of translation. But keep with it! Latin can be fun and, honestly, I often enjoy composition so much more than translating. Half the time I've not done my homework because I've been trying to write myself some Latin verse or what not. Heh. Terrible, I know, but very enjoyable!
Oh, right, the first one, almost forgot. Hm, well, I've gotta run, but you're doing fine, I'm sure you can figure all of these things out. As you say, you just need a grammar book, and a good dictionary I must add! I love Cassell's dictionary (has an awesome English to Latin section... it's what's allowed me to do all my composition!) As for the grammar, try this one:
http://www.amazon.com/Students-Latin-Grammar-Cambridge-Course/dp/0521385873/ref=pd_bbs_sr_1?ie=UTF8&s=books&qid=1233535606&sr=8-1It's what I use, and it's awesome.
Anyway, good luck on the Latin! More than anything, enjoy it!
PS
Sorry if I get a little excited about Latin grammar. Eh, that's stuff's all my field, so whenever someone starts talking about it I get all giddy.