Fanfiction:ZeaLitY Poetry DOZ
Days of Zeal
September 16, 2004
Line 14 was originally
"When we are near, and gazing into our eyes."
Richly dark, the orchestra of the night Played softly its summer, starlit breezes, As we met within the aura-filled for'st, Among enchanted wood, lit by moon's flight. 5 Yet I was high above, in cloudy freezes, Adrift; immersed in an Enhasian dream, On a jeweled, cushioned bed of Zealian crest -- Free to love the coming Autumn; to sight Endless waves below -- ripples and creases, 10 Which caressed as dreams the world to blue rest -- For all passions and colors, brighter seem From vantage of majestic isle in sky -- And too, with new luster, the world gleams -- _ When I am near, gazing into thine eyes.