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Re: Chrono Break (fan fiction work in progress)
« Reply #105 on: March 20, 2009, 07:20:26 am »
o_o

Wow. Um.

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I don't know what to say to the end there. Just...how? How did she die? Did she choke or something? o_O

Freaky, though. Downward spiral from here on out? Oh dear me...

Also, don't worry about how long it took. Art takes time. Don't rush it.

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Re: Chrono Break (fan fiction work in progress)
« Reply #106 on: March 21, 2009, 05:07:36 pm »
The next part will reveal the manner of death.  Good to see you're still reading, Chocobo Fan!!

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Re: Chrono Break (fan fiction work in progress)
« Reply #107 on: March 22, 2009, 05:15:34 pm »
Haha, you're welcome. :) This is much better than anything I could write. Looking forward to the next part! (Like I said, though, don't rush yourself)

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Re: Chrono Break (fan fiction work in progress)
« Reply #108 on: April 14, 2009, 09:05:44 pm »
Update!  No new part yet, but I thought it was time to give a head's up!  I'm working hard on the next part.  It's a dialogue heavy piece, and dialogue takes me a while sometimes.  I do think that after this, the rest of the story should come fairly quickly.  Mayhem and destruction has always come easily to my hand ^_^

Anyways, stay tuned!  I hope to present the next piece by the end of the week, though I've been known to be late before!

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Re: Chrono Break (fan fiction work in progress)
« Reply #109 on: April 17, 2009, 07:44:28 pm »
Okies!  The next part is up:

http://www.honestgamers.com/systems/content.php?game_id=2242&console_id=10&fiction_id=461

This part reveals what killed Gina and begins the cycle of The Night of Flames, which is the third act in this four act story.  I'll try to have the next part completed by the end of April.

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Re: Chrono Break (fan fiction work in progress)
« Reply #110 on: May 11, 2009, 02:56:19 pm »
Updates on progress.

HG is no longer hosting fan fiction, I think.  I have to talk with them and see.  It may finally be time for to format and go with fanfiction.net

Secondly, i'm in the middle of writing a commisioned script for Hollywood, and that has taken priority over the last ten or so parts of C.Break

On top of all that, i fell badly.  Bone through finger.  Typing difficult.

Having said that, i am halfway complete with the next part and hope to continue releasing a part a month over the course of the year.  Thanx for reading and i'll keep you updated as more info comes to me.

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Re: Chrono Break (fan fiction work in progress)
« Reply #111 on: May 13, 2009, 01:13:33 am »
Ah, I was beginning to become worried something may have happened. (And from the looks of it, something did) Can't wait to see the continuation of this fantastic story, and eventually the finale.

Take care of that hand, you only get two.

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Re: Chrono Break (fan fiction work in progress)
« Reply #112 on: May 14, 2009, 11:49:39 pm »
Ah, I was beginning to become worried something may have happened. (And from the looks of it, something did) Can't wait to see the continuation of this fantastic story, and eventually the finale.

Take care of that hand, you only get two.

Thanks for the well wishes!  The bandages are off, the bone is back in place, and I think my writing speed has actually IMPROVED!  Like, Rookie of the Year.  I can't believe I just referenced that film.

This week is the due week for the script, and I'm aching to get back to Chrono Break.  No set dates yet, but it's coming up.  I'm at a writer's retreat all week, so hopefully I'll get to it.

Cheers!

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Re: Chrono Break (fan fiction work in progress)
« Reply #113 on: May 16, 2009, 10:01:48 pm »
UPDATE!
As of June, 2009, the above links will no longer work.  Instead, the fiction has been relocated to Fan Fiction.net.  It will take some time to get all the parts up there, but I expect to be fully caught up within a week or two.  Since I'm having to go back and repost many earlier parts, all parts have been slightly edited for continuity and style.  Eventually, I plan on a full rewrite, maybe even turning it into an original setting that could be published without fear of copyright infringement.  But for now, the re-posted segments can be considered "final cuts."

Enjoy!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5066583/1/Chrono_Break

As for the next part, I'm almost done with it, and am trying to catch up on Fan Fiction so I can post it.

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Re: Chrono Break (fan fiction work in progress)
« Reply #114 on: May 26, 2009, 03:26:44 pm »
UPDATE!

I am officially caught up on Chrono Break over at Fan Fiction!  I'll continue to drop posts here as I add posts there.  You can also keep track of my status by looking here:

http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1708898/Zipp_Dementia

The profile will be updated periodically to reflect story status.  You may notice that Part xvi comes out today.  I know it's been a while in coming. Thanks for being patient.

//Zipp cares

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Re: Chrono Break (fan fiction work in progress)
« Reply #115 on: May 26, 2009, 10:03:45 pm »
UPDATE!

Part XVI is up!  Here's a direct link:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5066583/17/Chrono_Break

Part XVII is expected to be out by June 26th.  I'm about half way done with it already, so we might see an early release.  Please leave feedback if you have the time!
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Re: Chrono Break (fan fiction work in progress)
« Reply #116 on: June 07, 2009, 01:15:06 am »
UPDATE!

Part XVII now complete and posted:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5066583/18/Chrono_Break

For those of you still with us, this furthers the events of the Night of Flames and has a little twist at the end.  Of course... the question still remains... what's happening with Crono?

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Re: Chrono Break (fan fiction work in progress)
« Reply #117 on: August 17, 2009, 01:56:37 pm »
It's been a couple months, but the next part is up:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5066583/19/Chrono_Break

Enjoy!

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Re: Chrono Break (fan fiction work in progress)
« Reply #118 on: August 28, 2009, 12:57:54 am »
Yey! *runs to read it* I SO need to catch up! :mrgreen:

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Re: Chrono Break (fan fiction work in progress)
« Reply #119 on: December 16, 2009, 03:48:00 pm »
Hey everyone.  Been a while since my  last update, I know.  That's because I was in school.  In any case, part 20 is now up and available:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5066583/21/Chrono_Break

If you want to keep up with my progress on the next part, you can keep an eye on my profile:

http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1708898/Zipp_Dementia

Thanks for helping me get this piece started.  If not for the enthusiastic response it received from members here, I probably never would've kept working on it.

Zipp