I am a complete and utter layman when it comes to music production, but I decided to give this a whirl and now you can have a non-musically-skilled listener's input.
Great vocals, I could have sworn you were one of the Beatles. Your avatar probably put that idea in my head even before I began listening, though.
To my untrained ears, your voice is being drowned out by the music, especially beginning at 1:30 -- unless you were going for a gradual dropoff in voice volume and you meant to do that. The guitar tune in background is actually quite catchy, but perhaps it could be a bit smoother in terms of tempo. My 2 cents.
When I listened to "Everyday," it immediately brought to mind Zyko's "A Man By the Shore" remix of some music from Ninja Gaiden II and Chrono Cross. Listening to "A Man By the Shore" now, I'm not sure why that happened, as the moods of the two songs are very different in my mind. Anyway, at around 2:50 in that remix, there's a great example of voice over guitar, with the voice and guitar volumes done just right. Just wanted to throw that out there, as it's one of the guitar pieces I listen to regularly.