All right, it isn't a submission. But the "fanfiction" place is closed to posting, so I figured this was the next nearest place. Anyway, as a mod you can probably move this to a more apt place anyway. Why didn't you make a topic like this, ZeaLitY? Or did I just fail to see it? Anyway, I just wanted to make a comment regarding the third part of you Gaspar Chronicle. At this moment I have, as is usually the case, only glanced at it (I'm feeling quite tired, and not up to much reading of any sort... and, if truth be told, have some homework I should be getting to.) But from what I have seen, I can safely say that you have, yet again, shown yourself to be the pre-eminent Crono fanfiction writer. I'm not joking or exaggerating, here. It easily surpasses anything I have ever seen on fanfiction.net... or anywhere else, for that matter. You have somehow, masterfully, retained the style of the characters, yet write in an intelligent manner. I think it looks extremely good, and I've only read a page! Really, I shall read it quite soon; I've finished writing my own Chrono story, now, so I have no more fear of being influenced (as was my childish fear before). At this moment, though, I'm just printing out a final draft and all, and have a certain volume of midterms fast nearing, but that will be ended soon, and I will make certain to read this (and, actually, read the first part, as well.) If this third part is anything like the second part was (which I am certain from the quick glance I took that it is) it has the quality of a professionally written tale, and the heart of the Chrono stories. Very nice, indeed. You should be very proud of yourself for it.
Just another comment, though... I find it funny how there appears to be a crossed thread between your story and mine. Both of us set Serge's memory as being sealed by Schala, and both have Janus there when he remembers (both by Schala's name, too, for that matter); an interesting little coincidence. Though I daresay you write Serge's dialect far better than do I. I had quite a bit of difficulty in writing his more colloquial speech (not a thing I am good at; I prefer older styles), which is why he speaks so scarcely in my story.
Anyway, good work there, and I’ll make certain to read it at first opportunity. I’ll give you a better review, as it were, then; but I think I can safely assume that it will be quite positive.