My new fanfic series, The Duplicates

[ChronoCorridor415]

I am starting to work on a new fan fiction series "The Duplicates" which is about two guys who get sucked into a time portal and sent to the world of Chrono Trigger, and also becomes the 2nd set of heroes (with recruiting, of course) just following the real set in saving the world!

[ChronoCorridor415]

Here is the prologue starting the series. In Microsoft Word document form.

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[Paleontole]

Ah, people getting sucked into CT, I'm always a fan of the "what if" type stories. Not a bad premise, as for the first part, maybe slow it down a bit, that's a lot of significant plot events happening in that short time, maybe talk a little more about what this experiment is about, or what their initial thoughts were when arriving in this new place.

[ChronoCorridor415]

Thanks for the comment, Paleontole!
And here's the edited prologue too!

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[Paleontole]

A bit better, maybe talk about -- whether now or later -- more on who these two guys are, most people already know who Marle and Crono are and what they are about, but with original chars that isnt the case.

[satchel_dawg]

That's cool. it's very original and has flavor.

[ChronoCorridor415]

Allright! Just added some more words on the prologue, and here it is, available for download!
I almost finished Chapter 1, but a power shortage just messed it up...

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[rushingwind]

Very intriguing.    I look forward to more.

Are you looking for a beta reader/proof reader?  I'd love to volunteer my services if you are interested.  It has nothing to do with the fact that I'd get a sneak peak at your work.  Nothing at all.