Glennleo, you are correct. This would be the forum to post comments/fixes/suggestions. If you would to proofread this stuff that would be great, an extra opinion is always welcome.
Also here is the list of dialects to follow for each era.
65,000,000 B.C.: Simplified grammar and speech, in essence same as NA translation.
12,000 B.C.: Older English formal speech.
600 A.D.: Modern English, formal speech only, with some older English speaking habits.
1000 A.D. Modern English, informal speech mainly. (Presumable exceptions would be something like a speech by King Guardia XXXIII, who would sound more like a 600 A.D. person.)
2300 A.D.: Same as 1000 A.D. presumably, as language would have deteriorated during the 300 years since 1999. Perhaps a few cases of 65,000,000 B.C. type simplified grammar.
Dark Ages:
For example: "Don't worry" becomes "Worry not"
(Some stuff in these threads may throw you way off or render you clueless. This is because Kyronea and I have had many of conversations before the boards were activated (I just have to sort through this stuff and post it).