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kalluafc

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chrono christmas
« on: December 19, 2006, 03:55:44 pm »
Hello!! I┤m a newbie and it's my first ┐fanfiction?...... Whatever. Enjoy it!!! :D

"Chrono christmas" by kalluafc

Somewhere in the world....

Kid(singing mode ON): Stealing bells, Stealing bells, Stealing all the way, Oh what fun it is to Ride.... Oh something like that, jejeje...

Kid(singing mode OFF): Hi Serge. Can I play with you? Your "Action Crono ninja version with a star wars sable" looks very funny.

Serge: Get off, dumbass! You are a girl. Play with a Barbie or something like that.

Guile: Hi guys. What's new?

Serge: Hi Gui... wait a moment... What on the hell are you doing here?

Guile: What?!? Can't I say "hi" to my best friends?

Kid: Seriously, wassup?

Guile: My girlfriend leaves me after the "Chrono pie in her face and start running". Whatever, you are my best friends, right?

Serge: ........... Yeaaaaaaaah........... Sureeeeeeee....... xD

Kid: What's a Chrono pie?

Guile: Whatever. Serge, I have a present for you from your mother. It┤s a new "action crono sweeper version with a cigarrette and a dirty cloth". It's better than nothing.

Serge: Oh! Thank you very much! You are my best friend! xD

Kid: And the present for me?

Guile: Sorry. You don't have parents or tutor to give you a gift, "lonely fair-haired girl".

Kid: Linx, I hate you!

Serge: Hahahahaha! Dumbass!! "lonely fair-haired girl"!!! xD

Yeah whatever, Merry Xmas to everybody!!!!!!!!!!! :D :D :D 8) 8) 8)

Kid: Happy thanksgiving.

Serge: Kid, What on the hell are you saying?

Guile: I want true friends! T_T

Well, it's all for now.

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Re: chrono christmas
« Reply #1 on: February 02, 2007, 10:23:12 am »
Congratulations, you finally got a response! My suggestion is that you use a LOT more description of the surroundings and make it more of a normal fanfic...NOT A PLAY!