Why does the contents list it as the Radical Dreamers Script?
A few quick things I noticed while reading just the Character Bios...
Crono ultimately defeats Lavos,
dying and being revived in the process.
I think that comma should be a semi-colon or something...
Nadia uses a Crossbow, not a Bow&Arrow...Her magical element is actually water, not ice...Strange but true...
Lucca uses a hammer for close-range attacks (might want to add that). Also, she's not limited to energy-based guns. She even has an air gun if I'm not mistaken...
Why is only Lucca mid-late teens? Shouldn't they all (Crono Core Team: Crono, Marle, Lucca that is) be that?
Wasn't Robo named Robo by Crono? Marle asks him for a name, doesn't she?
You're also missing Magus' weapon type...