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Fan Fiction / Re: A novel fragment - Robo's reactivation
« on: April 08, 2024, 08:06:06 am »
This chapter is fantastic! The way you've adapted the characters and setting from Chrono Trigger while adding your own twists and details is really impressive. The decision to rename locations adds freshness to the story while still retaining its nostalgic charm. The dialogue is sharp and the interactions between the characters feel genuine. And Marle's insistence on giving Robo a name adds depth to her character and highlights her empathy. Looking forward to seeing how the rest of the story unfolds!
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