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Dream Splash I - Zeal [2007] / Re: Story 1: A Lady's Champion
« on: September 13, 2007, 12:04:50 am »
I read your story over the course of a few nights.  What a great story!  It has a sort of "too good to be true, Twilight Zone feel" to it.  The first thing that struck me was when she brought Doan above the clouds and said that he could never return to the world below.  At that moment, I was putting myself in Doan's perspective, thinking maybe Doan shouldn't have been so quick to do this.  The ending really left me with that feeling in the pit of my stomach!  It was interesting how you tied the story ending into the game's history with the provision of the "cave settlement" (Terra Cave) and "mass labor" (setting the stage for the Ocean Palace).  Great job!

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Dream Splash I - Zeal [2007] / Question and deadline
« on: September 07, 2007, 10:59:10 pm »
I recently purchased Chrono Trigger (I'm a little behind, I know) but I could not put it down.  From the moment I discovered Zeal I could not stop thinking about what it would be like to live there.  Could I write a fanfic describing the possible daily life in first-person?

Also, how much time do we have left to work on our submission?  I was unable to find this information.

Thanks in advance.

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Dream Splash I - Zeal [2007] / Re: Alphard and Demeria
« on: September 07, 2007, 10:52:52 pm »
Good evening, I am a long-time reader of the site, first time poster in the forum.  I have read what you have so far and all I can say is Wow!  Where did you learn to write like that!?  This story is filled with much emotion and great attention to detail and I could not put it down until I read it through.  Your use of vocabulary is quite inspiring, especially the poem.  The only thing that detracted my attention for a bit was the use of the terms "corny" and "cheese," as it didn't seem fitting.  Everything is building up to a fluttery, romantic anticipation.  I look forward to find out what happens next!

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