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Title: My new fanfic series, The Duplicates
Post by: ChronoCorridor415 on April 17, 2007, 10:43:07 am

I am starting to work on a new fan fiction series "The Duplicates" which is about two guys who get sucked into a time portal and sent to the world of Chrono Trigger, and also becomes the 2nd set of heroes (with recruiting, of course) just following the real set in saving the world!

Title: Here's the prologue!
Post by: ChronoCorridor415 on April 17, 2007, 10:46:02 am

Here is the prologue starting the series. In Microsoft Word document form.

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Title: Re: My new fanfic series, The Duplicates
Post by: Paleontole on April 18, 2007, 12:29:12 am

Ah, people getting sucked into CT, I'm always a fan of the "what if" type stories. Not a bad premise, as for the first part, maybe slow it down a bit, that's a lot of significant plot events happening in that short time, maybe talk a little more about what this experiment is about, or what their initial thoughts were when arriving in this new place.

Title: The edited Prologue
Post by: ChronoCorridor415 on April 18, 2007, 01:10:57 am

Thanks for the comment, Paleontole!
And here's the edited prologue too!

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Title: Re: My new fanfic series, The Duplicates
Post by: Paleontole on April 21, 2007, 01:43:13 am

A bit better, maybe talk about -- whether now or later -- more on who these two guys are, most people already know who Marle and Crono are and what they are about, but with original chars that isnt the case.

Title: Re: My new fanfic series, The Duplicates
Post by: satchel_dawg on April 23, 2007, 04:45:52 pm

That's cool. it's very original and has flavor.

Title: The first chapter is coming soon...
Post by: ChronoCorridor415 on April 25, 2007, 12:18:34 am

Allright! Just added some more words on the prologue, and here it is, available for download!
I almost finished Chapter 1, but a power shortage just messed it up... :?

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Title: Re: My new fanfic series, The Duplicates
Post by: rushingwind on June 09, 2007, 12:05:19 am

Very intriguing.  :)  I look forward to more.

Are you looking for a beta reader/proof reader?  I'd love to volunteer my services if you are interested.  It has nothing to do with the fact that I'd get a sneak peak at your work.  Nothing at all.   :D