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Marbule Gallery - Completed Fan Creations => Crimson Echoes => Crimson Echoes Plot Construction => Topic started by: ZeaLitY on July 20, 2006, 04:48:02 pm

Title: Old Simplified Plot Outline & Flow Chart
Post by: ZeaLitY on July 20, 2006, 04:48:02 pm
Chapter Titles are temporary.

Before the game


Prologue


Chapter One: Legacy of the Enlightened


Chapter Two: Double Trouble


Chapter Three: Beneath the Azure Sea


Chapter Four: Murmurs of Red


Chapter Five: Return to Prodigiousness


Chapter Six: Awaken to the Eruption


Chapter Seven: An Emerald Dream


Chapter Eight: The Stain of Regency


And in the interim, here is what King Zeal has done:


Chapter Nine: Animal-like Persistence


Chapter Ten: The Gray Forgotten


Chapter Eleven: The Glare of Midnight...


Chapter Twelve: ...And the Darkness of Noon


Chapter Thirteen: From the Mirror World


Chapter Fourteen - Once More Unto the Breach


Chapter Fifteen - Born in Sin, Die in Sin


Chapter Sixteen - Dreaming Across Time


Chapter X: Where Dreams go to Die


~

The ending begins with a depiction of all the characters at Chronopolis. There, they say their goodbyes and enter the Temporal Dispatch chamber. Ayla notes she will build the best damn cave Cro-Magnon man ever saw, and Frog notes that he'll dismantle the Vanguard since it is overkill. Robo wants to stay at Chronopolis. Crono, Marle, and Lucca hope that everything is okay. Marle is feeling sick from bringing back the Frozen Flame; Belthasar notes that it should get better with time. They return to 1002 A.D. Belthasar slowly turns to Robo, and they enter a new planning room. There, Belthasar mutters. He notes that the Time Devourer is not truly dead, and that he stopped the party because he knew they'd kill it, murdering Schala in the process. Robo is shocked. Belthasar explains a plan called Project Kid...it is hopelessly complex, and will require unprecedented timeline simulation, but it will produce the right ingredients for saving Schala. Robo volunteers to be a part of it.

Magus descends from the shadows of the ceiling to 'Confusing Melody', shocking both Belthasar and Robo. He reveals that he deduced something -- that King Zeal did not come into being as a villain of his own volition -- but that Belthasar botched the attempt to revive him with the other Chronopolis staff. Belthasar fears for his life as Magus blames the loss of Schala on him. However, Magus then confides in the plan, noting that he must once again go to a mysterious place. As a result, he cannot take part in this plan to save Schala. He has a plan, though. Guile walks in, and Magus notes that when the time is right, Guile is to be taken to the new landform El Nido to participate in the journey to save Schala. He notes that when he returns, he will meet up with Guile to learn of what has happened, and then definitely find Schala for good. Exeunt except Belthasar, who turns and says "Gaspar...this time I can make it right."

Cut to a black screen; "1003 A.D." We see a Reptite traveler approach Porre and give them Elements. Porre guy notes that this technology will finally let them sack Guardia and retrieve the Frozen Flame, of which they've heard about since last year.

Cut to a black screen; "Two years later..." pops up. Crono and Marle are sitting on the throne, and someone rushes in to tell them that the ultimate Porre attack has come. Marle is sick but insists on fighting. They break through and they fight; Crono kills about three before Marle worries that they'll find their baby upstairs. Crono refuses at first but eventually breaks away to go save their child. He escapes out of the back, takes a look at the castle, and keeps running as he hears soldiers approach. They go to the Truce ferry; the ferryman is scared, but agrees to take Crono and his child to safety, as he claims he'll always be a citizen of Guardia. They come to port, and are welcomed to El Nido. Crono's name is asked; he replies Miguel, and calls the baby Leena.

Cut to a black screen that says "Meanwhile..." Chronopolis. Lucca arrives to help finish the programming of FATE; Belthasar expresses great excitement over the coming Counter-Time experiment. He relates some more details to Lucca. Lucca is apprehensive, however, and asks Belthasar if everyone will be all right after this is said and done. Belthasar pauses and relunctantly notes that in order for his plan to work, a painful timeline will first come into existence. Guardia will have to fall, and Porre must be brought to power. Crono may be hurt in a new environment, while Marle will have a tough time ahead of her as she continues to recuperate from the Flame's illness. Even the Masamune will be corrupted from its experiences. But he notes that ultimate, when all things are said and done, everyone will be reunited and alive. Crono will cheat the incident that might otherwise claim him, while Marle will overcome the odds and lead the restoration. At the end of the day, all will be well...and everyone will be alive...He pauses here, and Lucca walks into another room. He then utters, "even you, Lucca..." Guile walks in and ask if it's time, and Belthasar tells him to stop bubbling and surging with such excitement. He then says "Surge...Serge? That just might work..."

And the OMG moment:

Cut to a dark location, reminiscent of Magus's lair. A portal open, and Magus steps out. He walks north to a cell to reveal...King Zeal. He notes that he almost -- almost didn't save his father, and still cannot trust him. But he notes that it is extremely favorous that he was able to save King Zeal...as King Zeal holds the last key to mastering shadow magic and beginning to master time itself. He notes that no matter how long it takes, King Zeal will teach him the final power...and he will make his return.
Title: Re: Simplified Plot Outline & Flow Chart
Post by: ZeaLitY on July 22, 2006, 02:58:56 am
Updated.
Title: Re: Simplified Plot Outline & Flow Chart
Post by: ZeaLitY on July 25, 2006, 10:33:35 pm
Check the main ending.
Title: Re: Simplified Plot Outline & Flow Chart
Post by: nightmare975 on July 25, 2006, 10:51:54 pm
Nice ending, but is what does Magis mean about his return? Are you aluding to a ROM hack that you plan to make after this? Heh, Zealty.
Title: Re: Simplified Plot Outline & Flow Chart
Post by: Chrono'99 on July 26, 2006, 06:07:53 am
To be honest, I don't like that ending. Guile just appears out of nowhere and seems very important for the events to come, but in CC it's totally the opposite: he's so unimportant that recruiting him is not even compulsory... As for the Crono=Miguel theory, I think it seems forced, unnatural, not only because the theory can be shocking but also because it comes all of a sudden with all the other CC connections. Some connections are pure facts, but some like this one seems like overkill, like forcing too much connections... After these few scenes, a scene telling that Crono needs eyeglasses or a scene revealing that Luccia is "Lucca's Guile" could almost fit and not shock the player more since everything is already so shocking.

And despite all these "forced" connections (IMO), the most important question, unanswered for years, is still strangely left without much details: how the hell did Porre invade Guardia?

But well, this is just my opinion and maybe I'm just nitpicking (maybe it will sound more natural when actually playing the game). I do like the last part with King Zeal though. It's a bit darker than the rather hopeful endings of the series, but it's the point here.
Title: Re: Simplified Plot Outline & Flow Chart
Post by: Agent 12 on July 26, 2006, 03:58:51 pm
Well.....we have to definately keep the project Kid reference that'd be absolutely crazy if we didn't.

The promethius circuit will be alluded to during the Lucca/Robo scenario.  So it won't be completely all of a sudden.

You really don't like the miguel=Crono theory?  I think that's the most believeable theory that has ever come out of this wonderful website.  ......sigh I really really like that ending. 

We are definately covering why Guardia falls.  The Time travelling reptite that gets sent back to capture Marle is still alive when the timeline gets fixed due to TTI.  He then brings elements to Porre.  That would be a huge advantage.  The porre/guardia conflict is I think the best part about CE.


--jp

Title: Re: Simplified Plot Outline & Flow Chart
Post by: nightmare975 on July 26, 2006, 07:37:03 pm
miguel=Crono theory?

I do believe I was the one who started that.
Title: Re: Simplified Plot Outline & Flow Chart
Post by: ZeaLitY on July 26, 2006, 07:57:27 pm
...It was started by someone named Vaeran at Gamefaqs.
Title: Re: Simplified Plot Outline & Flow Chart
Post by: nightmare975 on July 26, 2006, 07:59:07 pm
...It was started by someone named Vaeran at Gamefaqs.

Well, I was the the one who brought it over here. :lol:
Title: Re: Simplified Plot Outline & Flow Chart
Post by: Chrono'99 on August 02, 2006, 05:44:11 pm
I've just started to play the more recent ROM version (yes, I'm late), and I have a question: how can (Cedric) Guardia exist in a world where Zeal didn't exist? History should have hugely diverged. Also, I'm still a bit confused about the timeline King Zeal created. In this timeline, did both the humans and reptites get in contact with the Frozen Flame, or just the Reptites?

Oh and on a totally unrelated note, what's the nature of Magus' journey some times before 11,998 BC?
Title: Re: Simplified Plot Outline & Flow Chart
Post by: Agent 12 on August 02, 2006, 06:56:40 pm
I don't see why it's impossible for him to exist....I mean it is still a hugely diverged timeline.  Instead of leading a powerful army of Guaridans against Porre he's struggling to keep the remaining humans alive against the no longer extinct Reptites.

I'm pretty sure that the Humans still contacted the flame though Zeality will have to confirm (I even thought about having Cedric use the flame).  I say this cause they are more  intelligent.  I'm pretty sure the only difference is that the ice age was not as drastic allowing Reptites to survive and grow to power.  Everything else should be the same.

When you played through the long Belthasar speech was it as bad as you imagined?  I realize it's long but hopefully the music/sprites made it more entertaining.

--jp
Title: Re: Simplified Plot Outline & Flow Chart
Post by: Chrono'99 on August 08, 2006, 06:09:34 pm
I suppose the Belthasar speech is okay... I think it would be easier to grasp with more "individual" textboxes though... What I mean is that currently the text goes on and on in the textboxes without interruption, and often a sentence is spread across 2 boxes. You don't really have time to ponder between each textbox since the sentence is not finished. I mean, a textbox with an unfinished sentence

is like a paragraph with an unfinished sentence. The flow is difficult to follow when it's

written like this, isn't it? :) I think it would be better if each textbox would actually end with a full stop (so that there's a real "pause" between each textbox/button pressing).


EDIT: Also it would add more drama if the Frozen Flame doesn't "open" itself until Schala reaches it (the "closed" form is its normal form when the Arbiter is not there or it's not awake). It would add a few seconds of suspense before the player says "ohh! that's the Frozen Flame!"
Title: Re: Simplified Plot Outline & Flow Chart
Post by: TheOutlaw on August 23, 2006, 04:58:07 am
Guile coming out of the woodwork is kind of Random.
What if some background on guile is created in the ending, like what if he is a clone of Magus that was dumped out from all the bending and shttering of timelines, and belthasar decided to nab him. although he is a magus clone he has lived very different experiences, memories, and no place to go. Therefore he is going to be used to watch over project kid.
Title: Re: Simplified Plot Outline & Flow Chart
Post by: Hadriel on August 23, 2006, 06:42:11 pm
Just from skimming it, it actually looks like just about the perfect fusion of every idea that's been brought into the project.  Once my computer is fixed, I'll have time to read it more in-depth.  That'll probably end up being the last thing I contribute to the project; I'm absorbed into planning a new fanfic, and have been for the past couple of months, save for the fact that my computer's been broken for about the last three weeks, so I'm posting from a library comp.