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Kajar Laboratories - Fan Works and Submissions => Fan Art => Topic started by: RoxSilverFox on October 13, 2009, 09:31:34 am
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Done around 16 hours total work on this.
Current Version: Click for Final Version (http://www.chronocompendium.com/Forums/index.php/topic,8224.0.html)
\/ The below image is V5, to see the final version click the link above /\
(http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs50/f/2009/314/2/7/Schala___Kid___Zeal_by_Rox_silver_fox.png)
~Rox out~
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I really like the style of this picture. The bold colors and the use of solid forms and limited color depth give it a certain primordial appeal, not to mention the iconic design of that very prominent eye. Also, I love the font used for her name! Very fitting!
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http://www.chronocompendium.com/images/wiki/3/3d/Cross_Beta_Glenn_Lizard_Rock2.png
Nice.
Did you consult the CC demo art?
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I really like the style of this picture. The bold colors and the use of solid forms and limited color depth give it a certain primordial appeal, not to mention the iconic design of that very prominent eye. Also, I love the font used for her name! Very fitting!
Glad you liked it.
http://www.chronocompendium.com/images/wiki/3/3d/Cross_Beta_Glenn_Lizard_Rock2.png
Nice.
Did you consult the CC demo art?
Yeah, that was basically the inspiration behind it.
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Aaaaaand... Update!
~V2~ (http://Rox-silver-fox.deviantart.com/art/Schala-Kid-Zeal-140137985)
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Update... Again!
~V3~ (http://rox-silver-fox.deviantart.com/art/Schala-Kid-Zeal-140137985)
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That's great. I love the colours!
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That's great. I love the colours!
Glad you like it :D
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New version up ya'll
HERE!
(http://rox-silver-fox.deviantart.com/art/Schala-Kid-Zeal-140137985)
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I've enjoyed watching the progress on this. Looking sharp!
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Are you using a mouse? There are a few problems that have existed since the first iteration.
I don't particularly like the eye, but if it's a stylistic choice then that may just be what you're going for. It just looks a bit flat and at the same time, a bit too big. Like the eye is actually painted cardboard stuck on the character's face.
The main actual problems I see are in the edges. It's most noticeable in the arms, I think. They're a bit lumpy and the muscle structure is anatomically incorrect. You can see it in the hair a bit too.
I'll give a more full critique later, when I'm not in class and don't have people wondering why I'm looking at a cartoon picture of a young girl with "swords and tattoos" (their words, not mine :lol: )
Overall it's not bad, and I've been watching your progress. I think you would benefit from acquiring a drawing tablet. I really like your colors, and the blending has gotten increasingly better since the first version. Keep it up!
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Good job, you showed a soft gentle side to her, yet she still looks like she can kick ass.
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Are you using a mouse? There are a few problems that have existed since the first iteration.
I don't particularly like the eye, but if it's a stylistic choice then that may just be what you're going for. It just looks a bit flat and at the same time, a bit too big. Like the eye is actually painted cardboard stuck on the character's face.
The main actual problems I see are in the edges. It's most noticeable in the arms, I think. They're a bit lumpy and the muscle structure is anatomically incorrect. You can see it in the hair a bit too.
I'll give a more full critique later, when I'm not in class and don't have people wondering why I'm looking at a cartoon picture of a young girl with "swords and tattoos" (their words, not mine :lol: )
Overall it's not bad, and I've been watching your progress. I think you would benefit from acquiring a drawing tablet. I really like your colors, and the blending has gotten increasingly better since the first version. Keep it up!
I do actually have a drawing tablet that I've been using for this but it's not an overly fancy one (it only cost $60) I don't actually think that it's the issue though, it may be the brush type I've been using in Painter. I'll see about playing around with some other brushes before I update it next.
And thanks for your critique :D
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Yeah, try a smoother brush, at least for the skin. You can get away with rough edges on clothes, weapons, and hair. But a female's skin, especially when young, looks more silky, and the actual curves on the body are long strokes.
Also, I just noticed the eye reflection in the blade. That blade is the wrong angle to be reflecting anything on the face. Threw me off for a minute.
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Linktacular! (http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs50/f/2009/314/2/7/Schala___Kid___Zeal_by_Rox_silver_fox.png)
Version 5, the final before the... final? Yeah something like that.
To see the final version venture over to Submissions! (http://www.chronocompendium.com/Forums/index.php/board,14.0.html)